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UsedCreation
UsedCreationLv149mth
2024-06-26 16:28

The writing really just breathes life into my characters who seem so emotionally dead and I love how it is being portrayed so far. The plot is a tad confusing as of the first 12 chapters but I can see it developing really well. Traveling to wherever those flames take them, finding ways to slow or completely rid MC of the Hollowing curse, while going through worlds and building bonds to restore one's humanity. Might not even be what the Author is going for but the possible outcomes are exciting. Great story and great writing. Keep up the good work

Forgotten Souls (JJK)

ImSadge
4.3
52 Chs

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ImSadge
ImSadgeAuthor

Nice. I really appreciate the review. Idk if the audience on this platform will like this or not seeing as my fanfic didn't get the attention most usually do.

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UsedCreation
UsedCreationLv14

It's just the lack of word count, otherwise everyone reading this now was looking for something like this on purpose. You'll get a bigger audience over time, just keep on writing and trust it'll pay off. Your writing skills are really good, just some motivation and a little help will take it very far, you're doing great man

ImSadge:Nice. I really appreciate the review. Idk if the audience on this platform will like this or not seeing as my fanfic didn't get the attention most usually do.
9mth
Martialdaoist
MartialdaoistLv3

bro this guy is lazy asf don't hope he will ever complete a single book

UsedCreation:It's just the lack of word count, otherwise everyone reading this now was looking for something like this on purpose. You'll get a bigger audience over time, just keep on writing and trust it'll pay off. Your writing skills are really good, just some motivation and a little help will take it very far, you're doing great man
8mth
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ImSadge
ImSadgeAuthor

Let's do an author review here: -The story is mainly about Veilhem (Ashen One) and Makima (CSM) and their character development when they were throw at JJK world. -Because I'm writing about character in Dark Souls so the story had a lot of gore and blood, maybe a bit self-harm. -As of now, I'm still trying to get better at understanding these characters's mindset so it would hinder my update stability but I think it's completely fine to trade that to get a better writing quality. -The story is heavily leaned on the religious and their twisted love aspect so it isn't for anyone to read this but nonetheless, I'm quite enjoy weiting this piece of work.

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Ps_Zaki
Ps_ZakiLv3

bro just being a makima fanfic deserves a 5 stars (I'm not forced into this and I'm mentally stable )

9mth
CrimsonRoseDevil
CrimsonRoseDevilLv14

could use a bit of editing due to a couple of typos but I'd say pretty good story characters fit their manga and anime counter parts and good story arc progression. 8 out of 10

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AeFc91
AeFc91Lv4

never thought i would see combination like this. looking forward B)

9mth
BlackHeartx210_x
BlackHeartx210_xLv4

Honestly it’s interesting and I’m looking forward to more

9mth
Afrodit1
Afrodit1Lv13

Author, please don't leave ff. It's pretty good. Even though there are small mistakes, no human can do everything perfectly. So, I'll be waiting for you to upload new chapters.

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Moha_bz
Moha_bzLv3

I just realized that I didn't even post a review. This story really deserves a lot more but it doesn't work because of the webnovel system where you have to post daily or at least once a week. But this story is really amazing the relationship with Makima is so romantic with ups and downs and Makima is like in the manga so the author respects her character well

2mth
glarodriguez
glarodriguezLv2

El capitulo de hoy me lo confirmo, que puto asco...............................................................................................................................................................................

4mth
grimtide
grimtideLv4

Very interesting relationship looking forward to more

9mth
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