UsedCreation

Honest opinion, the way this was written is good, but feels dishonest to both characters. Just feels like more could be expanded on this, like some agenda on Orion's part to keep them safe. Just after all the effort he put for them, this feels empty

Didn't he have a system?

Ahh thanks for clarifying, gets confusing with all the terms the series uses

Which Beast tho? Pretty sure there are only a couple unaccounted for, and the only possible one at this point in time being Beast 6

LETS GOOOOO

Ahh i see, thank you. Just got confused as whenever Saber Lily uses it, it shatters

Like the way youre setting it up, keep cooking man

Harem Protagonist Ex kicking in

Just gonna be very blunt and honest here, It's very good. You stick to the source material, you expand in ways that are plausible, and all that is added is incredibly reasonable. Honestly the way the story is heading and directed is very good and very easy to stay into. Pacing can be said to be slow but it is made so to stop plot holes from occurring, and when they do you correct them. Be as for the characters, you do incredibly well at bringing them to life and make them feel like the people they are. overall very good and please keep up the great work

And this is before he even learns to Trace properly, he's going to be so much stronger in the future