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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv134mth
2024-07-05 14:38

The plot is overly drawn out, and nonsensical. The mc killed juggernaut (aka one of the most resilient, durable characters in Marvel) but struggles against Magneto...yeah right. The MC is pretty much a worse version of Sukuna, with none of the charm. The most accurate way I can describe him is "Emo" "Teenager" and whatever else comes with that. And that "Emo" aspect isn't even remotely appealing, as it was done poorly. The story has stalled drastically as of around 15-20 chapters in, and has fallen off horribly. It was a good read in the beginning, but not anymore. And for that, I'm giving it a 2.0 out 5. I hope the author actually pays attention to the feedback and improves, but I somehow doubt that will happen.

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ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13

Pretty much the second he killed Juggernaut, was when the plot made no sense. As that man is far more durable than even Magneto, him killing/defeating Juggernaut with ease, but struggling with Magneto or any other mutant (besides a rare few) makes genuinely no sense at all.

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