fanfic writers had enough with gojo, now they're going for sukuna lol, I counted atleast 5 sukuna fic rn including this, it made me remember the Andy toy story meme ' I don't wanna play with you anymore ' being gojo haha 😅😂😂

A lot of forced plot, so he goes to learn sorcery from the sorcerers but they say no because “he doesn’t have any magic potential” witch is so wrong anyone can learn sorcery from them. I am guessing the aurther is making him get rejected by everyone (no really just Reed, Tony & the Ancient one) to make us sympathetic to his plight.then magnito fight around him and his brother dies, we get like a chapter of him just praising his brother for taking care of him instead of his mother. Then instead of blaming magnito he blames the marvel world and is going down the madra path where he is ganna probably rewrite the laws of the universe to stop that idk?

Made for people who love edgy teen lords fantasy with good dose of cringe writing also sprinkle with diabolical dialogue. MC is simply a cheap knockoff Walmart version cosplay sukuna with sad tragic backstory as every MC does, to make him little bit close to sukuna villainy.

Thought that this fanfic might be to my liking because it has a MC with Sukuna abilities but the Author does not know the proper power level of other Marvel characters as he made other characters which should not stand a chance against Sukuna survive the fight just because Author want to stretch the story longer Overall Not worth your time (my opinion)

He is artificially elongating the fight scenes and nerfing the MC so that the story and conflict goes on longer than is necessary. ...............

This story has a great build up and concept, with a lot of potential. Hopefully u don't drop it. Also don't make the mc a reckless genocide fool but a intelligent one who keeps his track clean till he gets stronger to face shield or xmen or avengers

The author is probably a new one or...a bad one, im saying this because he breake one of the sacred laws about writting fanfictions, what law? the next one -Nerfs (the MC get nerfed or the author makes X power nerfed for "plot" convenience or bad aplication/underperformance of said power)

Nerf …………….

The plot is overly drawn out, and nonsensical. The mc killed juggernaut (aka one of the most resilient, durable characters in Marvel) but struggles against Magneto...yeah right. The MC is pretty much a worse version of Sukuna, with none of the charm. The most accurate way I can describe him is "Emo" "Teenager" and whatever else comes with that. And that "Emo" aspect isn't even remotely appealing, as it was done poorly. The story has stalled drastically as of around 15-20 chapters in, and has fallen off horribly. It was a good read in the beginning, but not anymore. And for that, I'm giving it a 2.0 out 5. I hope the author actually pays attention to the feedback and improves, but I somehow doubt that will happen.