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RandomFateFan
RandomFateFanLv48mth
2024-08-02 00:28

This is an interesting idea, that was completily wasted. My homies would call this IDP( Interesting Idea done Poorly) The forcing mc to help Issei and not letting he change to much just sucks, both in concept and in paper, there is also the issue of mc being just boring. (It shows that i fin't read, the reason is that i was reading it with wattpad)

True Magician (FatexDxD)

Tiir_Rumibul_3715
3.0
112 Chs

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Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

MC is forced to help Issei babysit him. He has everything, true magic, summons servants at will, and probably can solo dxd verse but he can't do that since apparently, Alaya said he can't do that. That's what you need to know, I can't read further

10mth

Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Reveal spoiler

10mth
Bored_Reader_111
Bored_Reader_111Lv4

MC is forced to help Issei and can't change the plot much even with two true magic in his hand so what's the point of coming to dxd world just for the plot to continue like in cannon .

9mth
Caedus_Aldric
Caedus_AldricLv13

too much wrong with it premise was good but the way it was written and then doglicking for issei really soured my reading experience

9mth
Aerian
AerianLv4

I would give it a negative review if I could, simply because the author seems to misunderstand the grandeur of true magic. Introducing him to the 'High School DxD' universe is akin to placing a level infinity boss with maximum stats in a level 1 map, without considering all of his additional powers. I've only read two chapters, and there would be several layers of infinity if we included all his other abilities.

9mth
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

While it’s good it’s also annoying to read with you mixing “ and - for speech.

10mth
wororrin
wororrinLv1

I just say - get him Boyz! Hero become Alaya dog. Become a nanny for Isei... whats a ANY point of taking care of a stupid schoolboy who is synonym of nothing... Whats a point of force-stopping development of the story; FORBIDDING the hero from changing canon.... give hero infinity powers and strength, but ban him from act...

8mth
Armando_Bronca
Armando_BroncaLv3

I haven't read any of this, but from the reviews I need someone to confirm that the Mc is Issei's bootlicker or not? And they don't change the plot in some way and I don't see the harem label which means that Issei will get everything

9mth
Febfew
FebfewLv11

5,3,2,2,2 Sorry author, but this plot is super strange and the comedy wasn't great. But the grammar and number of words are ok. ......................

9mth
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