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Aady_Shrestha
Aady_ShresthaLv45mth
2024-07-06 01:15

I swear to god web novels readers are just the worst. They won’t appreciate a story where the main character isn’t using his op powers to dominate everyone and create a harem. This story feels like a breath of fresh air compared to other fics. Although not perfect and yes Mc is forced to help out Issie, majority of the time the story isn’t focused on that. The author does a good job in keeping the story interesting. Yes the mc is Op but he also has heavy restrictions which keeps the story from being bland. In Conclusion, this story is an under appreciated fic with great potential so pls give it a chance to read.

True Magician (FatexDxD)

Tiir_Rumibul_3715
3.0
73 Chs

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PridefulRoyalty
PridefulRoyaltyLv12

why make your mc op just to put restrictions on him to nerf him? why make a dxd fanfic if you don't even want to change anything? breath of fresh air? go read The Last Amagiri, thats how you write a dxd fanfic. mc is strong but not op, he doesn't go dominate the world, every actions changes the plot, and he was npt forced to help issei just because.

5mth
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Chiefnaoto345
Chiefnaoto345Lv4

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PridefulRoyalty:why make your mc op just to put restrictions on him to nerf him? why make a dxd fanfic if you don't even want to change anything? breath of fresh air? go read The Last Amagiri, thats how you write a dxd fanfic. mc is strong but not op, he doesn't go dominate the world, every actions changes the plot, and he was npt forced to help issei just because.
5mth
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Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

MC is forced to help Issei babysit him. He has everything, true magic, summons servants at will, and probably can solo dxd verse but he can't do that since apparently, Alaya said he can't do that. That's what you need to know, I can't read further

6mth

Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Reveal spoiler

6mth
Bored_Reader_111
Bored_Reader_111Lv4

MC is forced to help Issei and can't change the plot much even with two true magic in his hand so what's the point of coming to dxd world just for the plot to continue like in cannon .

6mth
Caedus_Aldric
Caedus_AldricLv13

too much wrong with it premise was good but the way it was written and then doglicking for issei really soured my reading experience

6mth
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

While it’s good it’s also annoying to read with you mixing “ and - for speech.

6mth
Aerian
AerianLv4

I would give it a negative review if I could, simply because the author seems to misunderstand the grandeur of true magic. Introducing him to the 'High School DxD' universe is akin to placing a level infinity boss with maximum stats in a level 1 map, without considering all of his additional powers. I've only read two chapters, and there would be several layers of infinity if we included all his other abilities.

5mth
RandomFateFan
RandomFateFanLv3

This is an interesting idea, that was completily wasted. My homies would call this IDP( Interesting Idea done Poorly) The forcing mc to help Issei and not letting he change to much just sucks, both in concept and in paper, there is also the issue of mc being just boring. (It shows that i fin't read, the reason is that i was reading it with wattpad)

4mth
Mamamesta
MamamestaLv3

I haven't read any of this, but from the reviews I need someone to confirm that the Mc is Issei's bootlicker or not? And they don't change the plot in some way and I don't see the harem label which means that Issei will get everything

5mth
Febfew
FebfewLv11

5,3,2,2,2 Sorry author, but this plot is super strange and the comedy wasn't great. But the grammar and number of words are ok. ......................

6mth
wororrin
wororrinLv1

I just say - get him Boyz! Hero become Alaya dog. Become a nanny for Isei... whats a ANY point of taking care of a stupid schoolboy who is synonym of nothing... Whats a point of force-stopping development of the story; FORBIDDING the hero from changing canon.... give hero infinity powers and strength, but ban him from act...

4mth
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