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Mortimer_Darkbane
Mortimer_DarkbaneLv23mth
2024-09-20 03:55

As usual the MC is not a villian.The MC is more like a revenge driven antihero,who only kill people who stand against him.But the most disappointed thing about this MC is his naivity, he was tortured by caged bird when he was a kid by other kids.So when he finally kill Hyuga clan he didn't wipe them all out,he left many kids from main family and pregnant woman alive,making a hidden danger for himself.This is when this foolish guy still doesn't get rid of the caged bird,so if one of those kids the mc spared used the spell to activate caged bird mc will be over. Also the story is just borig

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Bilie_Marc
Bilie_MarcLv4

This is not cool at all man. If he killed everyone including children, us the readers, will not emphasize with him. In addition, you need to remember that he came from a civilized world unlike Naruto. And there was a sentence in the chapter, I don't remember which, that describes what being a villain is to the protagonist. Naruto is a protagonist and defend the existing system. Madara is a villain and try to change the system, although it turned out he was deceived, it still counts. You know what I mean right?

InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Non-Europeans will easily emphasize with that.

Bilie_Marc:This is not cool at all man. If he killed everyone including children, us the readers, will not emphasize with him. In addition, you need to remember that he came from a civilized world unlike Naruto. And there was a sentence in the chapter, I don't remember which, that describes what being a villain is to the protagonist. Naruto is a protagonist and defend the existing system. Madara is a villain and try to change the system, although it turned out he was deceived, it still counts. You know what I mean right?
Bilie_Marc
Bilie_MarcLv4

I just check out this guy's account and it is filled to brim with malicious comments. I have nothing to say to you.

InternetSaint:Non-Europeans will easily emphasize with that.
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

People from Myanmar(Buddhist),Japan, Korea (christian) may be the exception but look at China, India, Africa, any Muslim country and tell me I am wrong. Muslims are often very sadistic and practice 'honor killings' with their own family. Chinese people are the most morally bankrupt of them all and would sell each others organs if that somehow gave them an advantage. Africans and Indians are just African and Indian. Together with the Chinese they are the biggest scammers in the world. Africans are also the most violent people on earth. I don't really understand Indians but they act very reckless and don't seem to really care about other peoples lives either. Maybe some castes are better than others, idk. Tell me how I am wrong about this.

Bilie_Marc:I just check out this guy's account and it is filled to brim with malicious comments. I have nothing to say to you.
dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

emphasise are you stupid what you want is anti-hero not a villain

Bilie_Marc:This is not cool at all man. If he killed everyone including children, us the readers, will not emphasize with him. In addition, you need to remember that he came from a civilized world unlike Naruto. And there was a sentence in the chapter, I don't remember which, that describes what being a villain is to the protagonist. Naruto is a protagonist and defend the existing system. Madara is a villain and try to change the system, although it turned out he was deceived, it still counts. You know what I mean right?
Bilie_Marc
Bilie_MarcLv4

The Author says so. The title says so. Do I really need to elaborate it for you? Don't know what anti-hero mean, to be honest. Standing against a hero is what anti-hero does, right? However, what about someone who stands against the system, society or the world. You get it now? If you don't agree, just skip this comment. Do we know each other enough for you to judge me? That's why I refrain from saying much on internet. So many trolls.

dylan_pyle:emphasise are you stupid what you want is anti-hero not a villain
dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

I can't be bothered to cure your ignorance.

Bilie_Marc:The Author says so. The title says so. Do I really need to elaborate it for you? Don't know what anti-hero mean, to be honest. Standing against a hero is what anti-hero does, right? However, what about someone who stands against the system, society or the world. You get it now? If you don't agree, just skip this comment. Do we know each other enough for you to judge me? That's why I refrain from saying much on internet. So many trolls.
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

anti hero is a hero. just a sub genre. he'll kill or only save folk on the way to his destination and not randomly like superman. most folk on this app need a dictionary.

Bilie_Marc:The Author says so. The title says so. Do I really need to elaborate it for you? Don't know what anti-hero mean, to be honest. Standing against a hero is what anti-hero does, right? However, what about someone who stands against the system, society or the world. You get it now? If you don't agree, just skip this comment. Do we know each other enough for you to judge me? That's why I refrain from saying much on internet. So many trolls.
Bilie_Marc
Bilie_MarcLv4

This guy acts like a big shot. What a sick joke haha🤣🤣🤣

dylan_pyle:I can't be bothered to cure your ignorance.
MagnusAugust
MagnusAugustLv4

InternetSaint: People from Myanmar(Buddhist),Japan, Korea (christian) may be the exception but look at China, India, Africa, any Muslim country and tell me I am wrong. Muslims are often very sadistic and practice 'honor killings' with their own family. Chinese people are the most morally bankrupt of them all and would sell each others organs if that somehow gave them an advantage. Africans and Indians are just African and Indian. Together with the Chinese they are the biggest scammers in the world. Africans are also the most violent people on earth. I don't really understand Indians but they act very reckless and don't seem to really care about other peoples lives either. Maybe some castes are better than others, idk. Tell me how I am wrong about this.
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

You:

MagnusAugust:
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MagnusAugust
MagnusAugustLv4

Are you crying? Cuz that's what it looks like.

InternetSaint:You:
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Are you stupid? Cuz that's what it looks like.

MagnusAugust:Are you crying? Cuz that's what it looks like.
MagnusAugust
MagnusAugustLv4

Are you racist? Cuz that's what it looks like

InternetSaint:Are you stupid? Cuz that's what it looks like.
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

You deserve it.

MagnusAugust:Are you racist? Cuz that's what it looks like
MagnusAugust
MagnusAugustLv4

Girl, you're not making any sense. Deserve what?

InternetSaint:You deserve it.
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

You are the joke we are all laughing about.

Bilie_Marc:This guy acts like a big shot. What a sick joke haha🤣🤣🤣
Bilie_Marc
Bilie_MarcLv4

you can f off buddy. see if I care

InternetSaint:You are the joke we are all laughing about.
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

:)

Bilie_Marc:you can f off buddy. see if I care
Mortimer_Darkbane
Mortimer_DarkbaneLv2

There's a difference between an antihero and a villain. The author tagged this with "villain," so we expect an actual villain, not some naive guy who overlooks hidden threats. Those pregnant women have the ability to activate the Caged Bird, and at this point, the MC is still susceptible to its effects. So the only reason none of these women immediately used the Caged Bird to kill the MC—who destroyed their family and killed their husbands—is just plot armor. This is just poor writing with huge plot holes.

Bilie_Marc:The Author says so. The title says so. Do I really need to elaborate it for you? Don't know what anti-hero mean, to be honest. Standing against a hero is what anti-hero does, right? However, what about someone who stands against the system, society or the world. You get it now? If you don't agree, just skip this comment. Do we know each other enough for you to judge me? That's why I refrain from saying much on internet. So many trolls.
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