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Ultimate_Origin00Lv44mth
2024-10-29 16:26

A great novel to read. I just think MC character development is a bit slow like till ch 73 he isn't decisive at all he should get rid of the bad guys but leave them for the time being because he's too weak and doesn't have enough influence. Can he not think of contacting his enemies enemy and provide info for them so he doesn't have to do the dirty work like why the hell he does contacts jay's father (diaper or something don't remember his name) he could make the same amount of money with just a few moths work, and thanks author for the good work I just feel that MC is smart in some fields and the other dumb that's my humble opinion. And forgive me for any writing mistakes, English isn't my mother language.

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You are right about it...At first, I thought the same after that is the most practical approach but here is the thing.First about Jay's father, is from an education business. In such cases, you don't see much competition cause no matter how many seats they give it's not enough and will they have a limit. Now leaving all these things, think like this..What if the opponent didn't want to get rid of competitors.The human mind and greed are complex. Instead of getting rid of the enemy they might shake hands and eliminate Evan or the enemy might fear since Evan can find all this for others it can do the same for him so it's an unnecessary risk.But in case of Jay father he can threaten all he want and then use this leverage.Yes, the other party might try to eliminate him but that's why he hired guards isn't it?And as for future he will only grow. Also, development is slow because I made it.Mc isn't an anti hero here and since it's modern world it's good to change mindset slowly rather than make drastic changes within 100 chapters.

Ultimate_Origin00Lv4

You are right. Anyway, I'll continue reading, thanks a lot for your amazing work.

Lonelythree:You are right about it...At first, I thought the same after that is the most practical approach but here is the thing.First about Jay's father, is from an education business. In such cases, you don't see much competition cause no matter how many seats they give it's not enough and will they have a limit. Now leaving all these things, think like this..What if the opponent didn't want to get rid of competitors.The human mind and greed are complex. Instead of getting rid of the enemy they might shake hands and eliminate Evan or the enemy might fear since Evan can find all this for others it can do the same for him so it's an unnecessary risk.But in case of Jay father he can threaten all he want and then use this leverage.Yes, the other party might try to eliminate him but that's why he hired guards isn't it?And as for future he will only grow. Also, development is slow because I made it.Mc isn't an anti hero here and since it's modern world it's good to change mindset slowly rather than make drastic changes within 100 chapters.
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