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2024-12-07 04:32

I think this story is pretty solid and a very chill read. It's pretty much exactly as the synopsis says, an OP MC going from nothing to a broken player. The only caveat I have so far thats becoming rapidly more annoying is the HEAVY lean on constanting using the 'misunderstanding' cliche. The first couple I ignored but im starting to just roll my eyes now whenever it happens now and sadly, it drives all of the primary "conflict" atm. Still worth the read but im hoping this annoying stuff gets cleared up soon.

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Thanks for the review... and because of you're still in chapter 105, I know you will see a lot of improvements on the story.. We have 550+ chapters ahead... let me know your thought next when you have read further....

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