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2024-12-17 20:45

The novel is pretty decent, heavily influenced by "Overgeared", no conplains there, but, DUDE! Can You stop with the innecesary laughter every sentence!? I'm at 300+ ch and seriously the "hahaha" "khikhikhi' from about 80% of the characters is hella anoying AF! that makes them look the same, no variation on personality, they look dumb honestly. It remains me of the constant spam of *rumble* *aaaah* on "Infinite Mana" lmao (I dropped that because couldnt take it anymore)

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Galanteo
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LOL! The ‘hahaha’ gang is really just Goldrich, RememberMe, and Booba, and they don’t pop up all the time. Maybe they’re just extra happy? 😂 But seriously, thanks for sticking with the story this far!

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Hi... Readers... What's in store for you in this story? Please take a moment to read my summary. [img=Mad] 1. It's a VR game where the MC lives two lives: one in the game and one in real life. But mostly, he will dive into the game. [img=recommend] 2. Blacksmith? Kingdom Building? YES, YES, YES. The MC will spend a lot of time crafting items, building his own city... and eventually, building his Kingdom! [img=gift] 3. Wives? Yes! The MC will marry (Is this a spoiler?) The game world runs three times faster than real life, so he will spend years inside the game. [img=Shocked] 4. Romance? Yes! Harem? Uhm... Yes? Yes! [img=Loving it] 5. Action? Yes, but this novel will focus more on character relationships, friendships, romance, and life inside the game, which is not always about fighting monsters. But don't worry, there will be big battles, from one-on-one duels and party raids to massive wars! [img=gift] 6. The plot is very thick! I've made extensive Google Sheets to document everything. But don't fret, all details will be revealed gradually as the story progresses. [img=golden ticket] 7. Characters? They are alive, with their own personalities and emotions. They aren't just random figures thrown into the story. You'll definitely feel connected to them as you delve deeper into the narrative. [img=recommend] 8. One thing I pride myself on is CONSISTENCY. In the status, skill names, character names and backgrounds, equipment details, and items owned by the MC. Challenge the stat points and numbers shown in each chapter. I'm meticulous with my notes! [img=proud] 9. For those who love detailed novels in the gaming genre, I hope you'll find satisfaction in reading this story. Everything is presented in a structured and well-organized manner. [img=exp] 10. Ask me more. [img=recommend]

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