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Rebeccah_Herdener
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2024-09-16 03:37

absolutely LOVE this story! highly recommend! it's become one of my absolute favorites on WN. Leon(MC) isn't not stuck up or a jerk in any way, and he is a great family guy who's extremely motivated to accomplish his goals. the world background is fairly detailed but not overly so that it becomes distracting. this story also has GREAT comedy moments that absolutely tickled my soul! 100/10 rating imo.❤️👍👌

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Thank you so much for the incredible feedback! ❤️👍

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thank you for the wonderful story!❤️💗

Galanteo:Thank you so much for the incredible feedback! ❤️👍
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