Kalsapher

So normally I would have given this a much higher rating. Unfortunately, I'm doing this early. Due to the fact that in the later chapters author decides to put not only the current chapter but like 20 to 30 chapters ahead. its not only confusing. It's severely annoying. The story and characters are actually pretty good its this one thing that's breaking slthe story for me.

is it hotaru, hikaru, or hanabi make up your mind.

one hell of a skip there man

So I am confused is he a reincarnator or not cause he created Chidori and the variations but doesn't know what hero water is?

danzo not tanzo sorry was bugging me

did you forget his name? it's weird to just keep seeing Mc everywhere .

you must not have gotten far bro this is an incest book

So this is grind is my ninja way and the chapters are in the 200s still has the blatant Chinese problems but yea this is not the first translation of the story the other one is still updating last I checked

So I don't know if you are the original author or not but there's a copy of this called naruto venom didn't get to far into it it got like 57 chapters at this point but figured I'd let you know.

Overall its actually pretty good. Its not the first time someone made an Uzumaki/Uchiha mix but this one works. Writings good and I love the lack of blatant chinese racism way too much of that here. Unfortunately I am not a fan of the relationships. I find it suuuuuuuuppppppper creepy and can not get past it. It just ruins the story for me. So while I will personally drop this I will still say its a solid naruto ff.