After 75k words I'd like to have my say, so that any new readers might have a bit of an overview. I wouldn't say it's special or impressive, but interesting enough if are bored at the moment and need something to pass time. I wrote the first 10-20 chapters way before the other chapters and they weren't good in terms of content, nor were they very sophisticated, so I understand if most people are put off when they read the first chapters, but I guess there's nothing I can do about that. I try my best to incorporate people's ideas and suggestions into my story and listen to what the readers want and that's how my story is. A mix of chaos and creativity coming together. Hope you like it :D
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I think it’s time he delved into more magic yeah sacrifice and blood magic is cool and all but the potential is immense he could create a lot of genders if magic like in Harry Potter and become a magical innovator with the greatest magic academy in his territory giving him unmatched authority in the free holds and known world he could also start researching dragons themselfs although they’ve been researched like crazy already there’s always room for discovery like with the savages he made warborns didn’t the dragon lord tell him that they’ve already been fully researched but he still found room for discovery
Well, the problem here is that Martin never intended the World to be reliant on magic. Magic is subtle, and not like in Naruto where they can cause Firestorms, etc. The Mc kinda can because he is a cheat, but everybody else? No, certainly not. I don't wanna make this a Harry Potter spin-off, because the world was never intended for it to be. I can preserve the Magic, but all else? Magic in Got/Asoiaf is more about rituals, necromancy, enchanting, runes, and stuff. Sure, people can do elemental magic as well, but dragons will always be much much stronger. I will make something like an academy for magic and all, but yeah...
harem?
The Mc has two wives at the moment, so yes, but not really. I mean, I don't know if 2 are already a harem, sooo....
"he could create a lot of genders" ? ?? ??? ?????????
Add more women to the MC's harem, women from other great dragon lord houses.
Yuri?
