Item: Old Valyria: House Baelaeron
Rating: 4.8

TheImmortal25Lv143mth

2024-07-25 03:52

This book is just the thing I was looking for something that goes beyond the available characters in the media, and doesn't stop to challenge what could have been. I like these books especially. I also like this because I read a similar book to this kind but that book never went past the introduction, so this is a blessing. Keep it up Author, and take my stones.

Old Valyria: House Baelaeron

Jasonenrick

4.8

74 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies9

JasonenrickAuthor

I read only one where the Mc was an immortal Vampire and in 10 Chapters became the Emperor of Vaylria xD. Not to mention the grammar. I mean, mine isn't particularly great either, but at least somewhat readable. Thx for Review :D

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TheImmortal25Lv14

Yeah, you can check it out. The book is called - "Game of Thrones: The First Elven King". It kind of has the same background, but a bit more Passive MC in place of your Active MC.

Jasonenrick:I read only one where the Mc was an immortal Vampire and in 10 Chapters became the Emperor of Vaylria xD. Not to mention the grammar. I mean, mine isn't particularly great either, but at least somewhat readable. Thx for Review :D

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JasonenrickAuthor

Hmm, I think I read that one, but didn't particular like it, different taste and all

TheImmortal25:Yeah, you can check it out. The book is called - "Game of Thrones: The First Elven King". It kind of has the same background, but a bit more Passive MC in place of your Active MC.

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Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Jasonenrick:Hmm, I think I read that one, but didn't particular like it, different taste and all

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JasonenrickAuthor

A lot, but not a particular female at the moment. He going places ;)

Romance_guy:Romance?

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PixelPawzBRLv12

Thank you for sharing this. He claimed a moment ago that he never read Koji's novel tonight, when Koji mentioned that he's using the name that Koji made for his MC. 🤔 So at least we have him stating here otherwise. 😩

TheImmortal25:Yeah, you can check it out. The book is called - "Game of Thrones: The First Elven King". It kind of has the same background, but a bit more Passive MC in place of your Active MC.

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TheImmortal25Lv14

If you want to read something like this try, 'The Fireborn Prince (GOT)'. I found that book really interesting and honestly the future of that novel looks incredible.

PixelPawzBR:Thank you for sharing this. He claimed a moment ago that he never read Koji's novel tonight, when Koji mentioned that he's using the name that Koji made for his MC. 🤔 So at least we have him stating here otherwise. 😩

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PixelPawzBRLv12

Will do!

TheImmortal25:If you want to read something like this try, 'The Fireborn Prince (GOT)'. I found that book really interesting and honestly the future of that novel looks incredible.

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TraffordLv6

Name of that one?

Jasonenrick:I read only one where the Mc was an immortal Vampire and in 10 Chapters became the Emperor of Vaylria xD. Not to mention the grammar. I mean, mine isn't particularly great either, but at least somewhat readable. Thx for Review :D

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