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Dracmon13
Dracmon13Lv57mth
2024-05-30 21:09

Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow

Harry Potter: Drakor

Vikrant_Utekar_5653
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Josh_Corder
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i know right i hate this way of story telling that describes how each person feels and explains its like there are so many ways to express something but the way it is said here seems exaggerating and unnecessary like the conversation with moody and headmaster it was to much and didnt even convey what a normal person would say Moody didnt even say how bad it was or all the blood on the wall in the cupboard or anything or that his non actions could cause another dark lord to rise sigh w/e peace out not for me to read this

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Shuayeb_Ahmed
Shuayeb_AhmedLv15

how can this have both tags, harem and single female lead?

7mth

SaintSin
SaintSinLv4

This... is bad, it's like you make an AI read all the HP Fanfics out there targeting for children, select all the clichés with as much feel good elements with no order together and, for some weird reason, add a dash of benevolent Symbiote... That isn't even the worst part, this thing has NO life, none, it's completely robotic. FYI, all of the author's novel are the same in case you are looking to read it, so dont.

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Umbra71
Umbra71Lv4

Would be a lot better and move along a bit faster if the author didn’t rewrite the same thing close to 50 times per chapter using different wording or different sentence structure.

7mth
DeathE
DeathELv14

is it harem or single fl????????????????

7mth
ferferfer2
ferferfer2Lv5

i LOVED the idea, but the execution makes me believe this is either ai generated or chinese, given author-san said they were using ai SOLELY to correct grammar then i believe it is the latter option. i have not seen any young masters so far and the grammer is just perfect, so if this is a translation it is surely not just MACHINE translation, but the writing style still have that chinese flavor that repeats the same thing over and over again in diferent ways that triggers my ptsd and kills my braincells, ya know?

3mth
Monti_Xnotogo
Monti_XnotogoLv14

A great story but you got harry's grandmother's family Wrong, she's from the blacks, not the green grasses.

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Masterchiefminer
MasterchiefminerLv15

unexpected but not unwelcome.,..................

7mth
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