Dracmon13

hm a historia ta boa cara , gostei como os personagens agem, se vai dar mais algum poder pro ikki? por que se for colocar de cultivo pega uma tecnica pra corpo a corpo ou algo pra proteger a mente e tals, so vou conseguir doar pedra do poder, assinar não vai dar sinto muito.

The writing is very strange man, 1 chapter was great, now the 3rd onwards keeps putting those messages in another format, it's very bad to read and understand what's going on, there's the issue of the MC's power, this is definitely not a sayajin It's very weak, it's an alternative Saiyan as they say, but it's very weak, there's the scene of him fighting Spider-Man and like the guy is a giant ape about 20m tall, and being knocked down with just one A new Spider-Man's punch is bone, and Mat jumping high punching the monkey hahaha. and it has the overpowered tag which means that the MC is very powerful, but in the fanfic he has nothing strong. translation portuguese to english.

I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google

It's rubbish, the writing is very repetitive about Superman, distrust of him and such, a lot of mystery, and besides, the author nerfed Superman a lot, in his childhood he had x-ray vision and hearing, here at 18 to 20 years old he There's nothing hahaha, the author's stupid reason is because it's very appealing, so he didn't even try to include a Superman fanfic '-' and there's writing that is almost all AI translation generated by google.

There's no synopsis, the writing is clearly the use of artificial intelligence, and there's one more thing: he has the power of Hades from Saint Seiya and Harry Potter's magic or potion shouldn't work on him, but right?

Dude, this has no grammar, no spacing between lines, I'm reading an entire paragraph without understanding anything '-' you just have to improve it

the story is good and stuff, but the grammar is very bad, read some akikan fanfic and see how he created the character's speech patterns, maybe it will help with that

Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow

mc is the strongest man in the world in the top 10, and is beaten by an external god '-', I don't know if you know, but this is written by chatgpt, there are some human parts but that's it, and apparently the author sees a lot of things to put some Chinese phrases

Well, until chapter 3 I was able to read the rest, they started changing your name to a Chinese version, with that typical Chinese behavior in fanfics, doing what translates. This may give inspiration to other people, but continuing to read this doesn't work.