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LazyFitPanda
LazyFitPandaLv410mth
2024-06-03 08:02

I can easily say this is by far my favorite dragon ball story the character feels real and are fleshed out oh and I'm also enjoying the interaction between krillin and gotten more and more cause it shows the growth of both sides and the decision that krillin made makes it more important so he can keep up with the flow of dbz and dbs all in all a very good story i could say more but it will spoil alot so I will refrain from it though keep uobthe good work mate Ps: I kinda wabt to see goten go to other world's outside of db universe he does have the ability aftwr fighting janenmba i think it would give the story more longevity and soace for you to crate some interesting filler arc

Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign

Clay_Champion
4.3
238 Chs

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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionAuthor

Thanks for the positive review. It's a translation work, so it will end by chapter 250. I haven't read till the end of it, so I do not know whether he will go outside the dragon ball universe or not. (am at chapter 200) But it seems unlikely, there's "Anime war" fanon used in the fanfic around chapter 200, but it didn't have other anime characters in it like the fan made movie had in it. From Janemba, he didn't get the ability. I update a bit on chapter 48, about the loot dropped by janemba. It's an error on Author's part, i think, because he didn't really use them as their descriptions said they work.

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Yogurt_Cereal
Yogurt_CerealLv1

Habrá tal vez una chica para el ? A nadie le importa pero me gustaría que fuera Mai,saludos

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Zerot_Solar
Zerot_SolarLv6

Dragon Ball does go well with Chinese set of mind somehow 😂 The story is complete AU, forget about canon and just enjoy a new set timeline altogether. A MC that is completely evolving on each fight, and fight like a Saiyan enjoying and getting benefits of their Zenkai boost while he is at it. Hell even Broly is the DBZ movie one with the potential of the DBS one, an absolute evil savage. PD: Get this fair warning there is baching of the main cast on this one and yet conserve the essence of their personalities.

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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionAuthor

Translator here, giving this book a 5 star review. Because why not? I worked hard for this shid! The story start is a bit shaky and full of plot holes. Basically the author wanted to have Goten as a protagonist, but wanted his situation to be similar to Future Trunks, where Trunks timeline had Androids killing off everyone. In this fanfic AU timeline, Goten is the only warrior left on Earth after Cell kills everybody in Cell games. Author didn't want to give up on dragon balls, so he kept dende alive. But also doesn't want to revive the Z warriors who died, so he gave a flimsy reason that they don't want to revive saying that deceased should not interfere in the matters of the living. Although the real reason is given way later around after 57+ chapters. Canon is not strictly followed. Fanon is used a lot in this, so don't expect there to be canon stuff, somethings won't even make sense in canonical terms. Overall, it was a nice read. Give it a try. Don't question weird stuff, sometimes the stuff and reasoning of Chinese authors does not make sense. We don't question two things! One is the exaggerated numbers in the CNs, and other is the cast social norms/behavior.

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Tilted19
Tilted19Lv4

Was wondering why this felt like something that I've already read. Then I realized another author by The name of Rex_Zatch translated this exact CN as well. Though, his work was one-to-one copy whereas you have put in a lot of effort to make this story very readable. Thanks for your hard work!

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Rinchan7
Rinchan7Lv4

I have read a similar translated work before, it's just that this one is of higher quality. Good work.

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Kurosis
KurosisLv4

Author did an amazing job translating this I can tell it wasn’t easy. What I love more than the story is the author’s notes. Can’t stop laughing. He literally says what we think hahahah.

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DaviToledo
DaviToledoLv13

thanks for translate this work of art, i Will ask for more

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josuemandrak
josuemandrakLv2

amazing translation

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Lucifer951
Lucifer951Lv13

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Alice_chris_Noah
Alice_chris_NoahLv4

it deserves more popularity! It is a good piece of work! 👍🏻✨️

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Kinryu
KinryuLv13

I am impressed with the quality of the translation. Definitely perfect for people craving some DB.

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