I have to agree. it started great! i liked many things about it. but it went from a good fic, to basically a low quality smut fic so damn quickly. hell author even feels need to put "no lemon this chapter" past 2 chapters and that really tells a story for direction things are going, if it wasnt obvious already.

Completely agree, I was loving the beginning... Then he evolved into Scum Che and apparently women became hentai women and everything devolved into senseless and needless smut

I read your review and took some time to reflect on my writing. While I don’t think there are too many lemon chapters (only 5 or 6), I agree that some characters came across as a bit lewd. I’ll work on adjusting that in future chapters. Thanks for your feedback, it really helped me see where I could improve.

The main problem with your story is the same with the other fics of ATG. MC that dosen't struggle in the world and are flat in personality, unlike Yun Che, and if the authors want to make the story interesting, need to add harem. Which I don't mind, if it is well written, which in most cases, it's not. Like I said, the way you developed the relationship with Chu Yuechan is really good, and I was hoping that you would do the same with Qingyue and the rest. Unfortunately, it dosen't happen like that. Forget about the women not acting like they should do, the problem is the MC, he dosen't struggle, he wants a harem(which is a bit cringe) and be on the top of the world (Which I don't remember him saying that), but after that? He dosen't want anything else, his personality is flat and he is not interesting to me. And if you add the women falling for him with ease, well... I don't need to explain furthermore.

I get where you're coming from. However, it’s practically impossible for him to struggle in the Blue Pole Star with his talent and meta knowledge. If he did, it would make him look foolish. But that definitely won’t be the case in the Realm of Gods, even with help from Mu Xuanyin and Jasmine, since neither of them is strong enough to back him up there. I might have been a bit lazy when handling the relationships with the other women. I’ll try to fix that in future chapters. That part of your review made me realize it.

is this a translation of Chinese fic?.........

I agree 100% with what you said. I put kind of the same reasons in my review. I feel like it just went down hill after him and Chu Yuechen split when she went to the frozen cloud sect. Like I’m not trying to read another generic harem gathering ATG fic.

Author-San smoked Dao of Culture too hard and went berserk...

well if you don't mind that and follow the rest of the story it's quite fun

not blaming u, but women are opening arms for him like he's a magnet ... just feel it's too easy..... it ruined ur extraordinary story flow....