It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.

I have to say, I wasn't expecting this story to be so fun to read. The MC is smart (but not too much), and much more patient than Yun Che. Honestly, the only thing I wish there was more of would be intereactions with known characters, but now that (spoilers to chapter 11) we are in the main continent then I believe things will only get better. The writing quality is actually quite good and there are very little grammar mistakes. Hopefully the author can keep the consistent updates, because overall this story is really good if you like ATG.

For now 3 stars for 3 incredibly well-constructed episodes. I can say that these initial chapters are the introduction to the book, like the first steps of the mc before he officially begins his story, now we just have to wait to see what the author of this fanfic brings us and if it continues with the same quality.

4.0 STARS!!!!! HE FORGOT THE 'ITS' IN THE TITLE !!

The beginning chapters from like 1-30 is really good and comical to me. But from there it goes down hill to me. It seems like at that point the author changed the story to the mc gathering women from every where he goes. I’m not interested in reading a dumb harem gathering story right now.

Atg is a story I really like. In fanfics, I see writers rewrite the story of Atg, but I don't know if no one finished it or if it's just me. Now I want to say to the author, please try to do your best and don't drop it in the middle. I have high hopes for you and give you 5 stars.

5 stars it's good, but too much women destroying the plot. And MC like to cook

This ATG fanfic is so good that it might be the most entertaining thing I have read in recent memory. This is a good Crack fic with an interesting plot. Hopefully, the story keeps entertaining me as it has so far.

Me gusta mucho hasta ahora y he leído muchos fanfics de atg Bro ,mas ,más,más,más,más capítulos 😃😸👍👍👍😸😸😸👍😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸😸😸👍😸