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2024-07-08 17:36

# HAREM, Are you going to keep the harem, or are you going to do like the author and exclude the harem as the story goes on, to make your life easier?[img=proud]

Harry Potter the Fifth House: Galegold(corrected and redone)

Echo_Chamber
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Echo_Chamber
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My thoughts are along of the lines of a relatively realistic relationship of teens but with the mixture of the whole potential contracts bit: come and go, come and go and return, steady, one nights stands, and break up and make up. It could go anyway to be honest depending on how I see it progress. So he could end up with many along the way and none at the end, or end up having one or two. Or have them all.

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TheGreatGod
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Do you have a set ending pair in place yet?

Echo_Chamber:My thoughts are along of the lines of a relatively realistic relationship of teens but with the mixture of the whole potential contracts bit: come and go, come and go and return, steady, one nights stands, and break up and make up. It could go anyway to be honest depending on how I see it progress. So he could end up with many along the way and none at the end, or end up having one or two. Or have them all.
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Postmand
PostmandLv15

Good book, bad MC The grammar is fine and the idea is good, but what takes the novel down is the worldbuilding and MC. World building: has too strong magic for a wand so he can automatically do windless magic, the fifth house is a new concept for me but it’s poorly executed in this novel and too good/OP compared to the other. The reason for them not knowing why the house was there was rushed and poorly thought out aswell. MC: The mc was a baby for 1000 that got his knowledge though some family magic, he has a superiority complex were he looks down on everyone in the story like Ron, Harry, Malfoy and every teacher it feels like. It get annoying real quick that he doesn’t try to get to know them but just judges them even when they are nice. He doesn’t show any basic respect for anyone even when they are nice to him and is like “yeah you would probably do something for your ‘greater good’” even when he just wants to know some basic knowledge that is pretty relevant for the future. So overall he just feels like a kid Malfoy that can do wandless magic and comes from a even better family.

10mth

LongNi
LongNiLv14

Thank you for editing this book it’s an interesting read No offense to the original author but the names and grammar was all over the place This one’s grammar is good and names are consistent and right

11mth
Alex_McPherson_0043
Alex_McPherson_0043Lv1

Amazing concept, well written and overall a good fan-fic. Now all I need is more updates and chapters. Hope that this novel doesn't get dropped. That's all

8mth
cooper_lehnert
cooper_lehnertLv15

one of the better ones I've read and I'll continue to read until I they give up or finish the book 📖😔

9mth
Eade_2025
Eade_2025Lv4

Thank you for making one of my favorite stories more enjoyable to read than the original and no fence to the real author of the original story.

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