Honestly, it seems quite nice, but the lack of spacing genuinely makes it a challenge to read… is it really so hard to press shift+enter every so often?

I would love to read this novel, but as the story goes on, the translation just keeps getting worse..

Honestly this translation makes me mad. It has a distinct lack of spacing and reads like someone took the raws ran them through a translator and maybe ran it through a grammar checker(can’t really tell honestly) then posted it without checking to see if any of it made sense in context. Then they have the balls to ask for money for something I would pay to unread.

I wanted to read it, but I couldn't finish chapter 2. All that unnecessary information just to say that he has Lucifer's lineage, is overpowered, can talk to animals, and is going to form a harem with Hermione and the others. It's hard to read.

I have a question why do all Chinese novels go for Cho Chang and Hermoine. I can somewhat understand Hermoine as she's "Emma Watson" even though she has many negative qualities but I don't know one redeeming quality about Cho Chang except being Chinese.

IT OK the only Thing i Liked was the system but i couldent read on ITS basacliy pedofillia with a system and Magic

I can’t read shit on mobile. No paragraphs. Change it then maybe one can read. In end there’s no hope reading something without even spaces separating sentences. Does seem like a nice idea, just don’t make it a chore to read…

interesting story idea very jumbled in the execution needs to be reedited and translated doesn't use any proper terms for the world it's hard to read but a good idea could have been done better

Horrible translation. You can go ahead and read this if you want to lose some braincells. Also im not a fan of harems but i gave it a shot, i really did. Only to give out 3 chapters in due to horrible translation that doesnt make sense