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Kwika
KwikaLv49mth
2024-06-21 13:35

Honestly this translation makes me mad. It has a distinct lack of spacing and reads like someone took the raws ran them through a translator and maybe ran it through a grammar checker(can’t really tell honestly) then posted it without checking to see if any of it made sense in context. Then they have the balls to ask for money for something I would pay to unread.

Harry Potter: I Have A mastery System

sabina_ali
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307 Chs

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Feebling
FeeblingLv6

Dont forget that the chapters are in wrong order...

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Zyanid_Warfare
Zyanid_WarfareLv4

Honestly, it seems quite nice, but the lack of spacing genuinely makes it a challenge to read… is it really so hard to press shift+enter every so often?

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Ivanicjpg
IvanicjpgLv15

I would love to read this novel, but as the story goes on, the translation just keeps getting worse..

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SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

I wanted to read it, but I couldn't finish chapter 2. All that unnecessary information just to say that he has Lucifer's lineage, is overpowered, can talk to animals, and is going to form a harem with Hermione and the others. It's hard to read.

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Bilal_Arshad
Bilal_ArshadLv4

I have a question why do all Chinese novels go for Cho Chang and Hermoine. I can somewhat understand Hermoine as she's "Emma Watson" even though she has many negative qualities but I don't know one redeeming quality about Cho Chang except being Chinese.

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Erick_Polanco
Erick_PolancoLv4

La novela no está mal el único inconveniente es que le faltan capítulos de por en medio lo que hace que sea difícil de seguir la lectura

8mth
bear_smith
bear_smithLv15

interesting story idea very jumbled in the execution needs to be reedited and translated doesn't use any proper terms for the world it's hard to read but a good idea could have been done better

7mth
Louis_reader_00001
Louis_reader_00001Lv15

IT OK the only Thing i Liked was the system but i couldent read on ITS basacliy pedofillia with a system and Magic

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Vynris_Foxtail
Vynris_FoxtailLv14

I can’t read shit on mobile. No paragraphs. Change it then maybe one can read. In end there’s no hope reading something without even spaces separating sentences. Does seem like a nice idea, just don’t make it a chore to read…

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Skelcthumal
SkelcthumalLv6

Was the author too lazy to go back to the first fifty chapters to fix the spacing? The book looks good, but it's not worth the headache of those unspaced chapters.

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