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Lllhd
LllhdLv16mth
2024-08-23 12:48

Good Novel. Lacks grammar and vocabulary in starting chapter but it gets better in later chapters. Good plot, it's starts off with typical VR plots and progress from there but after like chapter where the main female lead takes form its no longer the typical VR it's a long game, mixed with a bit of action and dark. Volume 2 gets things interesting. New characters and a full change. It's gets very good after the small back story if MC, and then the week early event and then the event. Then that royal series really gets going. Novel started off OK but it's gets good in later chapters. Mostly after volume 1.

Game Between The Greatest Anomaly And An Omnipotent Being!

Sky_novel_lover
5.0
177 Chs

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After reading it twice or maybe thrice, I decided to finally review it. The plot and the characters are good, they were always good. But the writing style was a bit flawed, now, however, after reading the same book three time, I see improvement--a shit tone of improvement. That improvement had made the book better than what it was, forcing me to give it a five start review. I won't say anything about the story, as it is for you to read; have a nice time reading it.

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I shall be shameless and give my novel a 5-star! Why? because I love my novel! For the readers: It's harem(2 or possibly up to 5 harem members. Not sure, I will probably end up asking in the chapters.) | Yes, there is Lemon | No NTR | No Yuri | No Isncest.

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