After reading it twice or maybe thrice, I decided to finally review it. The plot and the characters are good, they were always good. But the writing style was a bit flawed, now, however, after reading the same book three time, I see improvement--a shit tone of improvement. That improvement had made the book better than what it was, forcing me to give it a five start review. I won't say anything about the story, as it is for you to read; have a nice time reading it.

I shall be shameless and give my novel a 5-star! Why? because I love my novel! For the readers: It's harem(2 or possibly up to 5 harem members. Not sure, I will probably end up asking in the chapters.) | Yes, there is Lemon | No NTR | No Yuri | No Isncest.

Interesting story!! Filled with action, thrill and romance (not much for now).... This story is a good read with the plot of a mysterious and intriguing game between two intellectual beings who makes their moves against each other to fulfill their personal goals... The MC isn't a dumb and naive hobo and is certainly intelligent, cold and ruthless to his enemies...and the same can be said about the FL who is a mysterious figure with an mysterious background history who plays a major part in this game of intrigue between the MC and the other OP being...(btw she is hot 👍) Though the MC may be seen as a simple person but there's certainly more to it than it meets the eyes.....for more info just read the novel!!! [img=recommend]

Highly recommended The novel contains great plot and potential the only problem I found is that there are less chapters I want moreeeeee

I reached chapter 103. This novel is underrated. This book is a slow paced, the plot is really good, the characters all free alive and not just text. I love the main female lead Eleis, and the little sister Aisa, both are amazingly written. The bed action chapter is incredible but... the grammar is somewhat lacking in the starting chapters. The grammar and writing style is very good later on, if you read it you see the author's writing style improving bit by bit. From chapter 68 there is no grammar mistakes, (props to the Author, he is improving with each chapter) This author is very considerate, he put in effort to make images. characters, monsters, places, and scene the author makes it!. I talked to the Author once in discord and... He is 17, a High schooler. I have talked to many authors and all of them are 20 or more. I don't know what other think of this but I think it really incredible. I went back to the starting chapters to reread the book and surprise! The author is editing it! It's the same plot, just written in a better way! I highly recommend this book and really would want to see this author succeed. Questions to the author: When will Eva come? Will the MC have kids in the future?

"I'm thoroughly enjoying this novel! The main character's journey is expertly crafted, making it easy to become invested in their story. The plot is engaging, with unexpected twists and turns that keep me eager for more. What's more, the author regularly updates the story, ensuring I never have to wait too long for the next installment. The consistent releases keep the momentum going, allowing me to stay fully immersed in the world and characters. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a compelling and regularly updated read!"

It's Really good if we compare it to other novels like this one on this platform. It might become a masterpiece if everything go right..............

Honest Review: A very interesting plot, got me hooked, (Love the Female lead! She is hot, and my type.) But there are some grammar mistakes! only in the starting chapter, later chapters have good enough grammar. Very curious about the world as well as the power system, (Very mysterious! I like it) Overall: GOOD!!! wouldn't say the best but will say the plot is insane good, you just need to be smart enough to understand it. (Hehehe) Spoiler: MC acts mysterious because he can't be bothered with explaining stuff, (I figured it out... laughed for a while) Now give me your discord link

I like it. it's good And I like the author's other book.