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2024-08-15 11:15

I reached chapter 103. This novel is underrated. This book is a slow paced, the plot is really good, the characters all free alive and not just text. I love the main female lead Eleis, and the little sister Aisa, both are amazingly written. The bed action chapter is incredible but... the grammar is somewhat lacking in the starting chapters. The grammar and writing style is very good later on, if you read it you see the author's writing style improving bit by bit. From chapter 68 there is no grammar mistakes, (props to the Author, he is improving with each chapter) This author is very considerate, he put in effort to make images. characters, monsters, places, and scene the author makes it!. I talked to the Author once in discord and... He is 17, a High schooler. I have talked to many authors and all of them are 20 or more. I don't know what other think of this but I think it really incredible. I went back to the starting chapters to reread the book and surprise! The author is editing it! It's the same plot, just written in a better way! I highly recommend this book and really would want to see this author succeed. Questions to the author: When will Eva come? Will the MC have kids in the future?

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Thank you for reading! I will do my best to improve my grammar and style. I am still new to writing, but I will do my absolute best. Also, thank you for noticing my improvement. You are the first person to tell me that, and that really made me happy. ||| The answer to your question: Eva will be coming soon, around chapter 120 and I won't say more than that~! ||||| I will drop the formalities now||||| Yo! It's been like 5 months! How did you know I was writing another Novel!? I didn't even tell my relative, let alone the Group Chat. If you come to my country again it's my treat!!

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You got it. I might only come once a year. Let's talk when we got the chance.

Sky_novel_lover:Thank you for reading! I will do my best to improve my grammar and style. I am still new to writing, but I will do my absolute best. Also, thank you for noticing my improvement. You are the first person to tell me that, and that really made me happy. ||| The answer to your question: Eva will be coming soon, around chapter 120 and I won't say more than that~! ||||| I will drop the formalities now||||| Yo! It's been like 5 months! How did you know I was writing another Novel!? I didn't even tell my relative, let alone the Group Chat. If you come to my country again it's my treat!!
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