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Primordial_Master
Primordial_MasterLv126mth
2024-06-29 23:39

Mc is smart , calculative ruthless, strong but not too op, he's ruthless with his enemies but kind to those he cares about. He always stays calm and makes decisions with a clear mind. The author does a great job of creating just the right amount of mystery to keep you hooked. The side characters are well-developed and have their own stories, so they feel real,( specially FML she's my Favourite )and not just like extras. Hats off to the author; he put everything into the novel. He included images for everything—when I say everything, I mean EVERYTHING—to make our imagination even richer. I have never seen any other author put in this much effort. On the downside, the MC's interaction with other people is not much even with his own sister. The world building is not that strong. There are also some typos, but the author has promised to fix them.

Game Between The Greatest Anomaly And An Omnipotent Being!

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