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Kenai12_
Kenai12_Lv147mth
2024-05-15 04:36

Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.

Making Pokemon Games popular in New World

LORD_INDRA_
4.3
47 Chs

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LORD_INDRA_
LORD_INDRA_Author

Thank you for the review 💓

7mth
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Kenai12_
Kenai12_Lv14

No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.

LORD_INDRA_:Thank you for the review 💓
7mth
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LORD_INDRA_
LORD_INDRA_Author

Definitely I will keep in my Mind ✌

Kenai12_:No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.
7mth
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Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv4

I'm kinda confused about what the premise of the story is. Is it just a guy in a world similar to ours copying pokemon and passing it off as his own? I'm not demeaning it I just genuinely don't understand what else there is to the story based on the synopsis.

7mth
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Alice_chris_Noah
Alice_chris_NoahLv4

it's a good one. It's interesting to see people's reaction to different aspects of pokemon. I have a question though, will MC only make pokemon games or will he make other's like Assassin's creed, Legend of Zelda, Mortal Kombat, Mario etc...

7mth

KpayH
KpayHLv1

Good job. I'm waiting for these guys to show up... I miss them...

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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

Chill read, really nice. Only downside is the lack of scenes the mc is involved in. It’s mostly the typical streamers pov or othe game companies reaction. But it’s honestly not even a downside since it’s fun seeing their reactions.

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TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipLv14

Haven't read this yet, but i just wanted to ask a question. Are you by chance the author who went by "Lord_Indrath"? or a username along that line?? I remember reading this fanfic before under that translator, but the translation was basically still just MTL copy paste 😂😂 I tried to ask the author if he wanted me to help proof read but got ignored 😂😂 I still have the book saved in my Library, but it's been removed since so whenever i try to click it, it just takes me to the error page 😂😂 Just curious to know if u were the same or diff guy

5mth
darkray_zero
darkray_zeroLv1

Reveal spoiler

7mth
Blue_Raven_4992
Blue_Raven_4992Lv4

It may be translated but it is good Definitely recommend if u are a gamer

7mth
Chryst_AO
Chryst_AOLv3

Reveal spoiler

2mth
Frostkiller
FrostkillerLv1

i gave it a average score because it revise fanfic base on 开局制作精灵游戏：主播玩疯了 but i like how you did i hope you continue the work and add more of you idea in the novel cause i read the original it went bad due to some nationalism stuff so i hope you continue this cause i m immerse reading it

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Zeref_642
Zeref_642Lv4

I really like the concept of the story, but it could be even better if you improved on the grammar as well as using the correct terms like for example “Flash” and not “Shining Technique”. Except for the grammar and the other mistakes, the story is amazing and interesting.

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