it's a good one. It's interesting to see people's reaction to different aspects of pokemon. I have a question though, will MC only make pokemon games or will he make other's like Assassin's creed, Legend of Zelda, Mortal Kombat, Mario etc...

Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.

Good job. I'm waiting for these guys to show up... I miss them...

Chill read, really nice. Only downside is the lack of scenes the mc is involved in. It’s mostly the typical streamers pov or othe game companies reaction. But it’s honestly not even a downside since it’s fun seeing their reactions.

Haven't read this yet, but i just wanted to ask a question. Are you by chance the author who went by "Lord_Indrath"? or a username along that line?? I remember reading this fanfic before under that translator, but the translation was basically still just MTL copy paste 😂😂 I tried to ask the author if he wanted me to help proof read but got ignored 😂😂 I still have the book saved in my Library, but it's been removed since so whenever i try to click it, it just takes me to the error page 😂😂 Just curious to know if u were the same or diff guy

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It may be translated but it is good Definitely recommend if u are a gamer

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I really like the concept of the story, but it could be even better if you improved on the grammar as well as using the correct terms like for example “Flash” and not “Shining Technique”. Except for the grammar and the other mistakes, the story is amazing and interesting.