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Captain_SpoilerLv139mth
2024-07-27 20:03

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a story about transmigrated MC who possessed some trash young master who was unable to awaken any classes UNTIL hidden condition is achieved.. In this world, there are 10 classes which are; ✔️Magus (magician) ✔️Exorcist (purify evil) ✔️Beast Tamer (control beast) ✔️Warrior (close combat) ✔️Assassin (master of shadow) ✔️Archer (range user) ✔️Soul Wielder (use power of soul) ✔️Alchemist (potion maker) ✔️Succubus/Incubus (control desires of others) ✔️Domination (MC 1st class) There are millions of awakeners but only 10 classes exist? 👉🏻Well, yes.. Every 5 levels, each awakener will be given 3 cards that contain the skills according to classes for them to choose one of it.. Nobody knows what the skills behind these 3 cards are.. So, it all depends on luck if you are lucky to get good skills or not.. To avoid misunderstanding, MC is the only one who can awakened multiple classes while all other people, can only awakened one class..  At Lv1, MC awakened Domination-class, and at Lv25, MC awakened Alchemist-class.. There is possibility for MC to awaken his 3rd class at Lv50 and so on.. Right now, I just read 151 chapters (latest chapters for non-privilege), and MC is still Lv38.. Is MC strong? 👉🏻Well, not only is the Domination-class the rarest class in the world, but it is also the most mysterious and strongest class, which means it is also the hardest one.. What do I mean by "the Hardest"?? 👉🏻First, there are seven Trial difficulties; Beginner, Novice, Advance, Hell, Nightmare, Determination, and Death.. But the Trial for Domination is super hard where even the easiest difficulties start at "Hell" difficulty.. The Trial for Domination class is Hell (lowest), Nightmare, Doom, Godless and Death(hardest).. 👉🏻So, yup, MC is OP. He can fight double his level, such as Lv15 MC can kill Lv30 boss monster or when he is Lv23, he can kill Lv60 boss monsters.. Or when MC is Lv33, he kills Lv100 Elite Boss monster.. And the higher the MC level, the stronger the boss monster he hunted.. Does MC hide his strength or fly under the radar? Beep ❌️. Nope.. 👉🏻He showcased his strength in front of hundreds of people, and those people also recorded a video and shared it, and now it has been watched by millions of people.. Then, he showed up at the event where Lv500+, Lv900+ and even Lv1,000+ attended, and "showed off" his strength.. I don't know what the motive behind MC actions to show off his strength, but I pretty sure that MC possibly gained more hatred and jealousy from other geniuses who also attended the event with their powerful Backers or Backgrounds.. MC?? He got no one, no backers and no strong backgrounds.. Is this novel interesting? 👉🏻It was.. It was very interesting except during MC awakened his 2nd class: Alchemist.. But it is still interesting.. UNTIL The event where he showed off his strength in front of high-level awakeners who can kill him instantly.. MC willingly do it WITHOUT any benefit.. The only reason he did not die after doing a stupid stunt is because of plot armor.. I dunno but maybe some people like dumb MC?? Harem?? 👉🏻So far, only one girl seems interesting in MC.. Romance or adult scene? Luckily, no, for now.. Fast pace?? 👉🏻I read the novel from Ch1 until Ch101, like 7+ hours.. It kinda seems steady pace for me, not too fast and also not too slow.. 👉🏻But starting Ch101-Ch151, it did take me like two weeks to read them.. It has become superb slow pace after realising that there are lv900+ and lv1,000 awakeners while MC still at lv38 at Ch151 (latest chapter for non-privilege). What will frustrated you about this novel and why did it annoyed you?? 👉🏻First of all, there are no level limits for dungeons, gates, rifts, or realms.. For example, MC joined one of the secret rifts, and MC is still Lv16.. There are many awakeners who are Lv129, Lv119 and so on who join.. Seriously, many Lv100+ awakeners joined and compete with low-level awakeners? This lack of level restrictions kinda backfiring on the MC.. It really seems unfair.. Plus, the boss monster in the rift is only at Lv60+.. 👉🏻Secondly, MC also joins the event without a backer where a lot of higher levels are present such as: a lot of Lv200+, some at Lv500+, a few at Lv900+, and someone at Lv1,000+.. MC also acts arrogantly in front of them and beats their genius.. What did he expect them to act?? Admire him or, at worst, ignore him without having any negative feelings?? No way.. There are no restrictions for them to kill any low-level awakener.. Basically, they can wipe MC out without any backlash.. The only reason they do not is because of plot armor by the author.. Plus, by the way MC acts so confidently, arrogantly and shows off, it's not impossible for him to make more enemies without knowing it.. 👉🏻There is no explanation behind MC stats.. There are no fixed stats for each level up.. Sometimes it's 10+ stats, sometimes it 300+ stats, and other times it increases by 500+ stats.. 👉🏻Thirdly, MC has too many people who hate him.. When he just a weakling (before awakened), people hated him and kept bullying him even though his family is quite strong.. Even his own family wants to kick him out of their family.. Then, when he becomes OP and talented (after awakening Domination-class), many people are jealous of him, hate him, or try to take advantage of MC, including his soon-to-be "father-in-law".. 👉🏻Fourthly, what I don't understand in most author logic, well, not only this author, but also other authors who make a "Solo" MC.. Why does MC who is soloing a dungeon or rift, soloing the boss monster, defeat or kill high rankers, BUT only gain like one, two, or three levels?? For example: MC at Lv15 kills a Lv30 boss, gains 3 levels.. MC at Lv23 kills a Lv60 boss, gains 2 levels.. MC at Lv33 kills a Lv100 boss, gains 2 levels.. 👉🏻Other awakeners, they are fighting monsters weaker than them like they at Lv120 going to a secret rift to hunt Lv60 boss with their teammates, how much EXP do they gain personally?? 👉🏻For another example, there is a group of Lv200+ awakeners going to hunt a Lv100 boss monster (the leader of that awakener group is at Lv273), how much EXP will they gain? So, how can MC levelling still be slower even after hunting so many high-level boss monsters (almost triple his lvl right now), and that is not included all others normal monsters EXP (Even though they normal monsters, their level still 2-3 times higher than MC's level).. 👉🏻MC also competes with other Domination-class awakened in levelling.. But others Domination-class, they levelling speed is faster than MC who is soloing and fighting a monster 3 times higher than him.. They are Lv48 and Lv46 while MC is Lv35.. But they increase by 2 levels (become Lv50 and Lv48) in the same time MC increases by 3 levels (Lv38).. Is MC faster? Don't forget MC is at a lower level while they have a higher level and need to gain a lot more EXP to increase their level than MC.. That is why I said MC grows to become superb slow right now.. 👉🏻Fifth, there are many people trying to kill MC, and all MC can do is "knock them out" or if their level is too high, MC can only run away.. For example, there is a group of Lv200+ awakeners who are like "righteous team" and their priority is to save people, and they try to kill MC simply because of MC aura "seems evil".. MC, who still lv35 at that time, can only bluff against Lv200+ awakener and run away while acting like they are nothing, and not because he is weak.. It was quite interesting, but as the story progresses, it becomes more and more annoying.. The quality kind of drops.. I would give 5-stars before Ch100 and 1-star after Ch101+.. Overall, I will give 3-stars after considering that this novel has a good beginning story, but unfortunately, the story got worsening as it went further.. Well, maybe some people love this type of story.. So, good luck..

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EndKun
EndKunAuthor

thx for review but most people have told me that the story got even better later on lol, but that's totally fine if you dont like as you can't fot everyone's tastes haha, thx for reading [img=recommend]

OuroBoros_
OuroBoros_Lv10

thanks bro, what a logic author have about leveling mc level

ascelon71
ascelon71Lv14

Work on the negatives instead of covering them up .. it will help your book .. make mc more interesting instead of dumb one dimensional emotional less character .. zero character development

EndKun:thx for review but most people have told me that the story got even better later on lol, but that's totally fine if you dont like as you can't fot everyone's tastes haha, thx for reading [img=recommend]
EndKun
EndKunAuthor

not covering up anything, I accept all critics, but my books is the top 1 best selling in the "new-book" category [img=recommend]

ascelon71:Work on the negatives instead of covering them up .. it will help your book .. make mc more interesting instead of dumb one dimensional emotional less character .. zero character development
Astarfa_077
Astarfa_077Lv12

usually 90% of people who read in webnovel only want OP MCs without proper world building and logical scenarios. that's even trashy novels like my vampire system or whatever it was in the top categories. no offense author but i think that's why your novel is(or was) in the first place. If you really wanna improve then you gotta add more work to your writings and focus on the critics of the veterans

EndKun:not covering up anything, I accept all critics, but my books is the top 1 best selling in the "new-book" category [img=recommend]
Astarfa_077
Astarfa_077Lv12

if what the guy who wrote this comment is saying truth then it's a hard pass for those who are on this platform for more than 2-3 years

EndKun:not covering up anything, I accept all critics, but my books is the top 1 best selling in the "new-book" category [img=recommend]
Halliday
HallidayLv10

Spoiler: “Recently MC was lvl 43 when he entered domination trial and everyone else was lvl 50 but then when Mc leveled to 50 there was a girl who was 57 and the moon guy was 61 was kinda weird. Also I don’t get why MC is stronger than other awakened they are all domination class and the stat increases and other power increases are not properly explained Was a good read but I feel like you didn’t really look into this review or maybe these chapters were already written” Anyway GL on the novel

EndKun
EndKunAuthor

mc is stronger than other domination classes because he has other classes lol

Halliday:Spoiler: “Recently MC was lvl 43 when he entered domination trial and everyone else was lvl 50 but then when Mc leveled to 50 there was a girl who was 57 and the moon guy was 61 was kinda weird. Also I don’t get why MC is stronger than other awakened they are all domination class and the stat increases and other power increases are not properly explained Was a good read but I feel like you didn’t really look into this review or maybe these chapters were already written” Anyway GL on the novel
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

why bring up the status of your book, then? Seems like to me, you're just coping😂 Address the issue, not like, "Oh, ok. But do you know? My book is a best seller."😂 Even though it's true, it's completely unrelated to what he's talking about.

EndKun:not covering up anything, I accept all critics, but my books is the top 1 best selling in the "new-book" category [img=recommend]
Azulia_Kitten
Azulia_KittenLv15

Agreed.

Astarfa_077:if what the guy who wrote this comment is saying truth then it's a hard pass for those who are on this platform for more than 2-3 years
Hiricks
HiricksLv1

Author is arrogant just like his MC, I won't even bother to read this. It's pointless if he won't bother to fix the issues brought up but tease his readers with his so called achievement.

DaoistObvious:why bring up the status of your book, then? Seems like to me, you're just coping😂 Address the issue, not like, "Oh, ok. But do you know? My book is a best seller."😂 Even though it's true, it's completely unrelated to what he's talking about.
Mayank_Kumar_9274
Mayank_Kumar_9274Lv13

Thank you I personally don't like Mc who's character changes all of a sudden and becomes arrogant after becoming strong and badmouthing other and also where author just for story keep twiking mc power level without any logic and unnecessarily nerf mc just to make mc defeat those at higher level while being low where he just can be the one higher level one instead and also mc who would have been dead without plot armor

DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

The veterans aren’t really worth much either though. Pandering to an audience always makes quality suffer

Astarfa_077:usually 90% of people who read in webnovel only want OP MCs without proper world building and logical scenarios. that's even trashy novels like my vampire system or whatever it was in the top categories. no offense author but i think that's why your novel is(or was) in the first place. If you really wanna improve then you gotta add more work to your writings and focus on the critics of the veterans
Thereader_
Thereader_Lv13

damn this review is wonderful

OLB
OLBLv3

Fast food usually sells a lot

EndKun:not covering up anything, I accept all critics, but my books is the top 1 best selling in the "new-book" category [img=recommend]
Zanestorm
ZanestormLv3

Hey, bro. Mind doing mine, i could use the review. STORY Immortal God Spirit.

Fourleaf_Clover_
Fourleaf_Clover_Lv13

damn bro, thanks for the review. it's really appreciated.

JeffisDed
JeffisDedLv12

Thanks for the review, read most of it. I also dislike overly arrogant MCs

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Eldeel
EldeelLv15

Score: 7/10 WARNING: Story got dropped at the 90% mark but the author provided a brief summary on how he would have ended the story. I have quite conflicting feelings about this book. On one hand when I think about it there wasn’t much out of the ordinary about the book. But I do remember myself binge reading all of its chapters over 3-4 days. I assume the book always kept my attention as it was hyper focused around the mc and the story was high paced. Along with above average writing quality. The protagonist was OP but very rarely in a story was there plot armor moment. Yes there were plot devices but these were always mentioned before hand. How a situation panned out always depended on the mc’s battle instinct. The fights were also quite interesting, sometimes it was just funny how op Dark souls , roll into I-frames can be in a fantasy setting. At the same time the story had some of the laziest side character or romantic development. It felt too forced. Even the villains felt meh. Yes there was tension during the fight but mc always had an aura of invincibility. The academy was almost completely irrelevant and just used to introduce dungeons.Similary a lot of concepts felt under utilized in the story. But even after all this I felt sad when the book was dropped. For all its flaws the book always kept me entertained. Kudos to the author for giving a summary of how he would have ended the story. But I just feel regret that I coudnt read it till the end. All in a all it’s an ok book but it has a magical effect of grabbing your focus

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