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Fieldbreaker
FieldbreakerLv47mth
2024-09-28 14:10

I've only read the story up to chapter 12 and I'm really disappointed. Up to this point we only tell what happens in the story and almost never show anything of the story. This makes the story very tiring for me because even entertainment is simply left out with the words “they are talking”. Nico Robin is raised by the MC to be a slave who cleans and fights for him. Your love for archiology is completely removed. He frees Boa Hancock and her sisters in order to enslave them himself. I find this more than a little disturbing and should actually bring out negative emotions in Hancock and her sisters. Far too much time is spent on unimportant information and instead content is simply left out.

One Piece: The Strongest Creature

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Add to the Harem: Nico Robin, Boa Hancock, Nami, Nojiko, Viola, Rebecca, Shirahoshi, Shyarly, Baby-5, Monet, Yamato, Uta, Vivi, Baccarat, Carina, Smoothie, Hiyori, Reiju, Carrot, Sadi....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......

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Jploui93
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Nicolas_Bahamondes
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Mixj
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"World is sinking" ~ Famous last words

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Is it Chinese? ... . . . .

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