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Jploui93
Jploui93Lv44mth
2024-08-07 02:51

Pokemon harem BS, there's no substance in the story and a whole bunch of creeps in the comments.

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TianHa
TianHaLv4

don't care about your opinion hareeeeeemmmm

p3d0_Man
p3d0_ManLv4

Matheus_3355
Matheus_3355Lv1

Nobody cares about your existence. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem.

TianHa:don't care about your opinion hareeeeeemmmm
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TianHa
TianHaLv4

whether you like it or not there will be harem everywhere hahahaha haaaaareeeeeeeeemmmmm is best

Matheus_3355:Nobody cares about your existence. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem. No Harem.
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Matheus_3355
Matheus_3355Lv1

Nah, from now on, you and all the MCs will be jerks.

TianHa:whether you like it or not there will be harem everywhere hahahaha haaaaareeeeeeeeemmmmm is best
TianHa
TianHaLv4

harem is life only dead people don't like those fragrant flowers😋 and I am the plucker hahaha

Matheus_3355:Nah, from now on, you and all the MCs will be jerks.
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TJ_Rose
TJ_RoseLv14

Do you not hear yourself man? You didn’t even defend the story on it’s s plot and you just want to defend it for harem only. You need help.

TianHa:harem is life only dead people don't like those fragrant flowers😋 and I am the plucker hahaha
TJ_Rose
TJ_RoseLv14

The Mc seems like quality Oc but the problem is his fetish of being a pedo, maid obsession, hypocritical behavior, outright gender bias. He would rather trust females he just met with almost everything then men who he has known for majority of his life. The author clearly wrote this for fanservice and fetish venting. I’m losing interest in fanfics because it’s becoming more and more trash .

TianHa
TianHaLv4

yeah I need help from a flower with my big D

TJ_Rose:Do you not hear yourself man? You didn’t even defend the story on it’s s plot and you just want to defend it for harem only. You need help.
TJ_Rose
TJ_RoseLv14

Everyone knows your tiny, you live in stories because you know no female wants you in real life. Keep deluding yourself instead of improving your social life.

TianHa:yeah I need help from a flower with my big D
TianHa
TianHaLv4

I am here because i am 14 years old retard

TJ_Rose:Everyone knows your tiny, you live in stories because you know no female wants you in real life. Keep deluding yourself instead of improving your social life.
Jploui93
Jploui93Lv4

I get it, its hard to find actually good stories of Fanfics. Here's a list of Fanfic stories I've enjoyed to check out if you haven't already done so. By QuackVader Crows x Souls By MissRias Lady Stark By Passerby_Venne Lion King: Son of Mufasa By Carl_One Caught in the web of the Spider By easyread A song of ice and fire: Raenon Targaryen By Drkest: The Burnt Prince-GOTSI By 0StolenDream0: One piece: Build the strongest Beast Pirates By AlienWarlord: Im Spider-Man (MCU) I'm Star Lord (SWXover) By Marcia_05: ASOIAF/GOT: Minecarft in Essos. By RaccoonLeague: The Witcher-Uchiha Madara By Infinityreads: Game of Thrones: The Stark Shard By: Shadow_D_ Monarch3: I am Ironman (MHA) By LazyWizard: The Warg Lord (SI) (GOT) (ASOIAF) By EmmaCruzader: SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU) By Kingkillerdj2023: Naruto: Hero’s Fist By Paradox_: One Piece: Path to Power (one my personal favorites) By FanficMortal: I Can Transmigrate into the World of Anime Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack By TeemVizzie: Fairy Tail: The dark swordsman By Misterimmortal: Marvel: Mr. President Grandpa Universe in Multiverse

TJ_Rose:The Mc seems like quality Oc but the problem is his fetish of being a pedo, maid obsession, hypocritical behavior, outright gender bias. He would rather trust females he just met with almost everything then men who he has known for majority of his life. The author clearly wrote this for fanservice and fetish venting. I’m losing interest in fanfics because it’s becoming more and more trash .
Hydranoid88
Hydranoid88Lv4

trash

TianHa:whether you like it or not there will be harem everywhere hahahaha haaaaareeeeeeeeemmmmm is best
Nameless_Elite
Nameless_EliteLv4

just so I can find the list

Jploui93:I get it, its hard to find actually good stories of Fanfics. Here's a list of Fanfic stories I've enjoyed to check out if you haven't already done so. By QuackVader Crows x Souls By MissRias Lady Stark By Passerby_Venne Lion King: Son of Mufasa By Carl_One Caught in the web of the Spider By easyread A song of ice and fire: Raenon Targaryen By Drkest: The Burnt Prince-GOTSI By 0StolenDream0: One piece: Build the strongest Beast Pirates By AlienWarlord: Im Spider-Man (MCU) I'm Star Lord (SWXover) By Marcia_05: ASOIAF/GOT: Minecarft in Essos. By RaccoonLeague: The Witcher-Uchiha Madara By Infinityreads: Game of Thrones: The Stark Shard By: Shadow_D_ Monarch3: I am Ironman (MHA) By LazyWizard: The Warg Lord (SI) (GOT) (ASOIAF) By EmmaCruzader: SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU) By Kingkillerdj2023: Naruto: Hero’s Fist By Paradox_: One Piece: Path to Power (one my personal favorites) By FanficMortal: I Can Transmigrate into the World of Anime Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack By TeemVizzie: Fairy Tail: The dark swordsman By Misterimmortal: Marvel: Mr. President Grandpa Universe in Multiverse
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