Fieldbreaker

First I didn't lie and why should I? Second, everything I wrote is in your story. But why are you lying?

The story has a lot of potential, but is not for me I personally like the fact that the story doesn't take too much time and the action takes place. But this story should take one or two chapters for the development of the world and take their characters.. Good idea of Story, but to develop the characters and relationships it needs morr time.

I personally find people who deserve should get a second chance or at liest deserve it. But I can understand why you see this differently. Life is not just fair, why should it be dead. Shinobi should generally hide their abilities, knowledge is power and telling his skills so openly is just stupid. That he has Ems and more is not the problem. The MC is only twelve years old and has this skills. Not because he deserves it but got it for free. All of this would not be a problem for me if the MC were not so unbearable.

I have to admit I don't understand why the MC got a second chance. The MC is just scum. He forces himself in women and thinks of stealing the next wife from a husband every 5 minutes. The system then rewards him with the exaggerated abilities. The MC is really a terrible Shinobi who doesn't manage to hide his abilities at all.

I can understand every point of your comment and I agree with you. Unfortunately, I'm used to much worse quality here. Translation that makes no sense. Narration that changes from First to the third person in one sentence and grammar as well as spelling mistakes. But I always try to see the positive in the stories, even if the story about Black Widow is just nonsense and makes no sense. Yes, she is a spy and shouldn't believe the MC, trust nor anything. Unfortunately, I have already experienced side that generally do not tolerate negative comments, whether justified or not.

Unfortunately, the story is really boring. Although the MC wants to do everything differently, it doesn't change.Again he puts training in the first place and women stay as in the last life on the waiting list.

I have to admit, I personally find the story extremely boring. Heard the story in the car and almost fell asleep twice. Here the most boring is picked out of bleach and alchemist.

I have to admit I'm pleasantly surprised now.The story itself has a lot to do with the fact that the MC wants to expand its empire. The story has absolutely nothing to do with airships. The ship receives all the skills it devours.Since the MC is connected to the ship, he receives it through his ship. Why, i don't understand, but how can a sword eat a devil's fruit? That's one piece. I will continue to follow the story.

I have to admit, I personally don't like this story at all. The background story of MC is unfortunately not interesting. Unfortunately, the MC is not intelligent either. After recognizing Nico Robin , her Name slips out of him. Robin poisons the MC one day before his dual. I personally find this terrible, but that's the one piece world. The MC is still a dual poisoning. Although he was challenged to ranged combat, the MC changes the conditions from fighting to Close combat. We haven't seen him trained until now or have ever seen him in close combat. The story is really boring and I stop at Chapter 24.