Fieldbreaker

Gwen has 20K at age 17-18? I did something wrong growing up.

At his age, Peter shouldn't buy a sports car. He is young and these cars are expensive to maintain. After all, he only has his lottery winnings and no other income. Since he's not letting his aunt work, he should really pay more attention to his money.

"Anyway, want (me) to go with you?" or not?

How old are Gwen and Peter again in the story? 17-18 years old? Who at this age drinks wine? We're not in France.

Here he has the self-confidence again, somehow it ruins the story if you change the character every three seconds.

I thought our new MC didn't want to be like the normal Peter? Why does he keep asking for permission? Show yourself some self-confidence and don't always ruin it with your insecure behavior. For me he is an insecure child who doesn't know what he is allowed to do. This ruined all successes up until now.

Classic ice cream varieties include chocolate, vanilla and strawberry. Not a single variety anymore!

Didn't he say a short time ago that he had just had breakfast and that's why he wasn't hungry? why is he back again?