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DiabloRedfoxLv149mth
2024-05-12 10:52

this has very good potential only read till chapter 10, but hope you keep this up, grammar and everything is superb too, no Chinese stuff comes up either, keep on cooking my guy

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Lord_HasturLv4

harem?

DiabloRedfoxLv14

as of now, there hasn't been any

Lord_Hastur:harem?
Ellipse_arkLv12

is its a translation

scyflyLv4

you drunk bro? typical trash translation

DiabloRedfoxLv14

compared to other dogshet stuff I had to read, this TL is better, atleast he has proper grammar and doesn't change the gender of characters every paragraph

scyfly:you drunk bro? typical trash translation
countforkLv14

typical translation written in typical chinesy style. im talking about "courting death" level of chinese. concept is alright and grammar isnt too bad, but the chinese perspective does not fit the american culture. im gonna pass on this one.

Villain_GodLv13

now?

DiabloRedfox:as of now, there hasn't been any
DiabloRedfoxLv14

i dropped it a few days ago but till then there weren't any

Villain_God:now?
Villain_GodLv13

thanx

DiabloRedfox:i dropped it a few days ago but till then there weren't any
Stash_2999Lv2

bullshit its got chinese powerscaling that shoul tell u all u nee they weaken the fuk out of everything

DiabloRedfoxLv14

i dropped this a while ago, although I don't exactly remember all the stuff, it had a lot of repeating shi and mc just kept getting worse, also I won't say all Chinese stuff are bad, actually lemme rephrase, TLs who actually put in time and actually change the plot so readers read it through are there although rare, some of the stuff I've read and is currently reading is only good because of the TL, this one is pretty trash after a few chapters tho

Stash_2999:bullshit its got chinese powerscaling that shoul tell u all u nee they weaken the fuk out of everything
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