This fanfiction is very repetitive. Nothing new happens except for the introduction of new abilities. There is zero story development. The main character is constantly on the run. They try to kill him, he faceslaps them, and then runs away because he runs out of energy. He gets stronger, comes back, only to be attacked the moment he steps onto the street, then faceslaps them again, runs out of energy, and it all repeats. Additionally, the reactions of various characters are constantly described, which becomes tiresome.
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