i dont know even know what to say if you are going to make a background for him stick with it a capitalist having those dilemas about scamming people and hurting innocents just is nt it he said he wanted to be the best someone who will make wall street wolves call a psycho yet he keeps acting not like that all talk also i dont if you are doing it on purpose but the actor part is pretty useless what use would it be does he really need to be an actor when he is a part of the moonlit world i feel like you are just doing it as filler the writing quality sometimes are weird thats just what i will say
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There's a point to it. Trust.
Leo's acting career will be important in the future, since he's both the King and the public face, although those not in the know will think Leonis Magnus is a distant relative to the King. Having a dual identities will allow him more freedom as an unit. About the writing quality... Well, when I first uploaded, there were quite a bit of negative feedback, which did affect me. Nowadays I dont check on my comment or reviews as often so I dont get negatively affected and my writing won't suffer so it sbould be consistent to a point. As for Leo's obsession to money, it's an allegory for his desire for infinite growth. To him, money and influence are the Exp that'll help him 'level up' so to say. I dont want to spell it all out and leave it open-end a bit. Hope this helps.
for the writing you are switching pov way too much like i dont even know who's first person pov it is i mean i can get the dual identity but seriously acting that puts him in a spotlight that isnt good for a magus also his talents you put it like the system was limiting him by involving something mental connected to it i mean if you are going to use his acting and the fans that come with it then may it like a god and his believers where their worship makes him stronger
no, I get what you saying, but he'll rival the Association and the Holy Church in three more Arcs, so the extra attention won't harm him too much, plus having [Lust Spot] as the face of his company and eventually country will allow him more maneuver room, especially when it comes to propoganda in the future.
well yeah, there's the Faith Energy as well. although there are downsides, I admit, there are too many upsides, plus he can always disguise himself with Magecraft.
i get your points tho.
