the previous 2 fics was great but why the rewrite? I was kinda expecting for the 3rd installments to see what happen with him with the whole god things and about that voice that save him when he was about to die in the 1st fic

i dont know even know what to say if you are going to make a background for him stick with it a capitalist having those dilemas about scamming people and hurting innocents just is nt it he said he wanted to be the best someone who will make wall street wolves call a psycho yet he keeps acting not like that all talk also i dont if you are doing it on purpose but the actor part is pretty useless what use would it be does he really need to be an actor when he is a part of the moonlit world i feel like you are just doing it as filler the writing quality sometimes are weird thats just what i will say

a review to motivate the author ! a rewrite of past fanfics, now with the experience the first chapters will be a lot better and the story seems to be heading to a familiar direction.... so I don't recommend this to the faint of heart. there's only a chapters out right but I already know I can expect something good !

I'll give it a 5 🌟 review. If the author sticks to the same writing quality as the last 2 books, this is gonna be a massive hit.

hey author its been awhile, u might not know me but im a big fan of ur last fate ff, kinda devastated me when u announced that ur dropping it and been avoiding reading this ff remake, finally found my will to read this, I hope u don't drop it like u did with the last one.

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Fate fanfic that isnt bad is really rare !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah.. I'll need to wait a year for 100 chapters. It's quite jarring but I'll wait

This is my first EVER review, and I'm not exactly a critic, so I'll just say what I think of this book. I've read all the chapters of "Dead Man's Lament," and it was a MASTERPIECE! Unfortunately, I couldn't finish the sequel before the rewrite. But if there's one FATE fanfic that deserves 5 stars, it's this one. I've read many other FATE fanfics after reading "Dead Man's Lament," and so far, I can say with high confidence that this is the best out of all of them. The only fanfic that I think competes with this one is "Tale of Two Kings: Redux." I'm currently waiting for more chapters before continuing to read, and I just want to say thank you, author, for writing this MASTERPIECE of a FATE fanfic.