Well, since I already started it, I can tell you about it. The voice still exists, just not as the voice here. After re-reading it I thought I could do better, make things more engaging...etc.

oh well, the only thing sad about this whole rewrite is the waiting, gotta wait possibly a year for it to reach the same amount of chapter as the previous 2 combined

but still good luck mate on the rewrite

Aye. Thank you.

I'd say you've been successful so far.

thank you

Your welcome.

Author curiosity before i read it i remember reading your first book but then dropping it due to the simple fact that the relationship between mc and gil was too dàm slow i get it slow relationship but 300 chap withuot progress kinda irked me plus chapters that i felt were kinda like fillers. So my question is, is it gonna be the same here?

Depends, I'm trying to work out his relationship w Ciri first.

Depends in what sense lol bro i don't Wanna reach chapter 300 with the relationship that interests me the most again and still see no progress 😅, same for the filler chapter that you threw at times before the rewrite.

Also ciri? Who is it? When you say ciri it only makes me think of cirilla from the witcher

well yeah, it's that Ciri.

I see. Don't know how that is possible but i guess she somehow got to fate with her ability. In anycase about my other question will i still gotta wait to see any progress of any kind? Héll i remember you somehow pulled to 300 chap with mc being still a kid at the time 😅😅🤣🤣👍👍

Again take no offense since if i didn't like the story at the time i wouldn't even have reached 300 chap by a long shot. What i disliked was the slow as héll development slow is good but too slow is not.

it wasn't that bad😅 it's like 170 chaps or smth both installments combined? They should officialize their rela around chap 70?

It was bro it was. Especially when you pulled filler chapters with random events happening and mc having to get through a mess when those chapters could have been summarized into 1 chapter only lol. I liked the story but you did have the habit to lenghten things much more than they should have been😅😅😅

i dont know why either, I just feel like if I gloss over things too much then I'm not putting in the effort. No idea why😅 Im working on fixing it.

I get what you mean but putting too much attention in irrelevant happenings that got no real meaning apart from deepening mc Experience a Tiny bit makes the story Boring like those chinese fics where they lose chapters writing bùllshìtt like mc goes out they see his sword eyebrows ecc.. Mc return and goes to take a shower end chapter lol i don't know if you get what i mean 😅👍

Alright now that i said what i had i will put this one in The books i gotta read. Sorry if my rant bothered you or Hurt you in anyway bro it was just that i was really frustrated with your book before this rewrite especially since the story itself was good to the point i didn't sleep for a few days to catch up before getting to the point i just said fk this and i dropped it when i had seen little to no development. Again sorry for the rant xD😅😅😅

yeah, I think it's partly because I dont want to jump from one major event to another. Like I mentioned, I'm fixing it. Chap 80-85 should start with the Holy Grail War.