Great story! Interesting world building with ruthless mc with hilarious one liners! Only complaint is can’t wait until next chapter!

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I honestly think that this has the potential to become one of the best books out there, it gas a really great narrative and especially the way the characters are designed it's magnificent. I am always looking forward for every single update because once I read I feel like I have to read more, I think I need to sue the author for this!!! Because you're starting to make me an addict🤬, jokes aside I really have nothing to say about this I just hope that the author will have more inspiration so he/she would not stop to write hehehe, but still don't forget to rest. Thank you author!!!

Read this book up to chapter 150 and all I can say so far, it’s terrible. The MC is not a VILLAIN as it said in the genre but a Anti-hero that leans more towards good. Basically a vigilante. Wasted my time. make sure you don’t waste yours

this story is pretty generic moden fantasy how the story develops is so rushed that there is no room for things to breath and every chp is an info dump and become of this the character are barley develop and fi in to a troupe rather then flushed out character especially the mc te author focus on trying to justify the edgy nature of the mc this ruins the story as we the reader bearly spend time to get attached to him or other so and reaction the story makes is surface level and not deep. and on another not the edgyness of the mc makes him and interactions with him boring and predictable further destroy and natural progress development for the mc and other characters

A great book, I enjoyed reading it and seeing how the development of the MC unravel. The plot is interesting and intriguing at the same time so it won't let feel bored while reading it.

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First of all I'm a very big fan of villains, but most of the novels on web novel have so-called villains who are not really villains and act more like heroes. This book really explains and shows what a True Villain should be, a neutral evil villain and I am extremely impressed and pleased. I invite and hope for more people to read this 📖 📕. Lucius blackwater really showed that evil is just a matter of perspective and from which direction you're looking at it from. And in my opinion I support Lucius in both his thoughts and his actions, when you have a goal, it does not matter what actions you have to take as long as your goal is accomplished. Even if you have to slaughter a group of people, if your goal is achieved that is all that matters. All is fair in Love and War as they say, nobody cares about the process we only care about the results. When you go out to accomplish something, if you win the world will not ask you how you did it even if you did it through bloodshed. The world with Justify you because you won, because you are the winner your Slaughter or genocide will be justified, if you are the loser then you are the villain. Winners write history and losers have no place or right to explain their reasons, actions or difficulties in history. The Novel is well written and shows two different perspective of society, extreme racism and social class differences. It shows the difficulties, problems, suppressed resentment and evil hidden and problems that arise from such social class differences. I like the action of making lucious understand that his world is different from the world of the noble kids. But I don't like the other action of making lucious become indecisive or be affected by the noble kids thinking and ideology, for him to be influenced by them to start thinking maybe his actions are wrong or unneeded, that's just making him seem like he's weak and useless. I would like the author to make lucious more emotionally cold and indifferent if possible, and control his reaction towards Ralph's situation. So as not to make lucious take take an action that will be detrimental to himself. Lucius overreaction to Ralph's situation would end up becoming a weakness to Lucius, which will be bad for him. I hope the author would kill Ralph early to not make him drag Lucius down. Ralph's space door ability is very good and has room for improvement, but his emotional influence on Lucius is bad and a big NO, which makes him a liability. and should be gotten rid of. The author should please make lucious create some distance between himself and those Noble kids like silver, Dean Hall and the other kids in his class. The author should make lucious more level-headed so as not to be influenced by them otherwise, Lucius will become a so-called hero pretending to be a villain which which would ruin the book. I also hope the author makes lucious hunts more Heroes with good abilities and gets the abilities. Make him stop fighting his wild and logical side, let him embrace it and use it to his full advantage to get more powerful. And lastly I applaud👏 the author for his effor in creating this master piece and encourage him to keep up the good work and keep writing, because I support him. I LOVE ❤ ❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍 YOUR WORK AUTHOR AND I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING, BECAUSE YOU ARE THE BEST. 😘😘😘😘😘🥳🥳🥳👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏

I'm so hooked into this story already. The story is so good and the MC is awesome too. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen next. thxs for the story author.