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And he says he doesn’t want the same things his brother has…. Childhood traumas are a b*tch!! I’m sure it just seems normal to take his sis-in-law as his.

I think you might be right! That would be a really cool plot twist!!! Especially if the mom/daughter recognize the souls. But what is interesting too is that the FL drowned before transmigrating. So it makes sense that she would drown again to come back. 🤞

I agree with the previous comments, your writing is very interesting and different which is probably why you are having a hard time. Creating a new path takes hard work, please don’t be discouraged. Oh, if you are going to kill off Ethan, can it be before the tortuous chemotherapy? It would be too heartbreaking to know that he went through all that for Christine only to find out what she did to save him. I think realizing how much she must have suffered in his brother hands would end up killing him. Because, let’s be real, there is no doubt that he does not know the true Adrian. Keep up the great work!!

Is that slip up in her thought process? Make love vs have sex/intercourse with the goal of procreating… totally different things… okay fine, same action different mindsets.

Seriously ??? She is really silly

Thank you!!!

Why is the chapter repeating itself here???

So accomplished but so dumb?!? Love brain is a real thing…

🤭 the FP comment was just to let others know that the review was not due to an event to gain FPs. But no one will reject FPs. 😜

Okay, so I’ve only read 3 chapters so far but it’s worth giving a review (and just fyi there are no FPs ☹️). The book so far reads like a movie or I should say, as I’m reading, the images are drawn and play out like a movie in my head. So good!! I’m looking forward to seeing how the story develops . Keep up the good work, author! I think you just gained a new fan.