Warning: Don't read this if criticism offends you easily. I’m not trying to offend, but I will be honest and blunt with my opinion of the story so far. I expected more from the top of the collections rank. The story is dull confusing and feels like a lot of filler for no payoff. Yes, it’s early in the story, but I only enjoyed about 3 of the 48 chapters. The growth of MC’s stats is like watching paint dry because it doesn’t feel like any effort, and it drags on without enough explanation and description. Everything is madness this madness that blank here blank there. It’s supposed to evoke mystery, but it is confusing and feels like unnecessary BS. I couldn’t develop a stake in the character. He’s not developed enough, and what’s there doesn't blend well enough. I kept thinking the teased city building would be better, but at this point, I don’t know. Lastly, there’s some unengaging element in the writing style itself. Sorry, I don’t have time right now to analyze it to clarify specifically what it is. Here is the positive side: The author has a larger plan and a proven track record of commitment with regular releases. There are also signs of high effort. The story needs just needs to get there. Maybe also a better starting point.
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LIKEas someone who is caught up more or less, nah this guy is for sure as neutral as they come, while the shit he does is for power to protect those he loves his means are, well lets say would fall under the demonic sects branch sometimes(MCs hands are also gender neutral so no jade beauties surviving after doing some dumb shit).
Soul_Shocker:So hero type who disguises to be indifferent
Neutral MC on Webnovel from experience is an MC who is a hero disguising to be indifferent…….. About jade beauties……. you know what, forget it because this is Webnovel.
Sainted_One:as someone who is caught up more or less, nah this guy is for sure as neutral as they come, while the shit he does is for power to protect those he loves his means are, well lets say would fall under the demonic sects branch sometimes(MCs hands are also gender neutral so no jade beauties surviving after doing some dumb shit).
I'll be honest with the review , author has an over analytical brain ,explaining each and everything so much so that most of chapter comprises of explaining the thought process of mc from winning via elaborate schemes to something as trivial as peristaltic movement and reflexes involved in taking a shit 😂. the explanations make the story interesting but at the same time too much of these makes reading boring , you can skip 3 to 4 paragraphs and still understand the summary of all chapter. I have read more than 500 chapters and mc is still a level 0 nerd 🤓 whose still an ant in the big picture . At this rate it will take more than 4000 chapters to reach a considerably good ending unless author rushes the ending and throws out all the mystery and world building. conclusion being its a great novel to read if you plan on reading it for years maybe even along with your children at this rate 🤣