Item: SON OF DUNE
Rating: 4.8
Author: KingLettuce

KingLettuceLv21yr

2024-05-08 13:31

Fanfic has decent grammar with few mistakes here and there with improvements in later chapters, even with the mistakes it is still easy to understand. There are a lot of time skips and it certainly feels a bit rushed, but overall I enjoy it just fine even with its little mistakes. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

SON OF DUNE

Kingoffrogs

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