Item: SON OF DUNE
Rating: 4.8
Author: supermaniac

supermaniacLv146mth

2024-05-14 01:16

seriously loved the idea, you don't get to see many dune fanfic... And the concept of being paul's twin instead of a soul taking the place of paul is beautifully actualised, and that set this novel as a standout from others. My advice is for you not to be carried away with harems and the usual cliche of other fan fic.... In All... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN( on the way to being a masterpiece).

SON OF DUNE

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