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2024-07-28 20:40

The translation is okay, but sometimes they switch the pronouns for one person, I still don't know if Grom is male or female. The reason I gave such a low review is because of the MC. She says the only reason she agreed to bind to the system is because she wants to go back to earth. But she doesn't show us this, this story is just tell not show. Which I understand a bit, since this is a novel, but they really have to explain every single thing to us. Though I understand sometimes when they HAVE to explain the MCs actions, because there is oftentimes no rational thought behind the MCs actions. I quit reading it on chapter 100. The MC SAYS that she wants to go back to earth, showing that she doesn't like being here. But on chapter 100, she gives away ALL TEN MILLION OF HER POINTS, so that she could revive her ex. Now I understand that he didn't treat her well, being cold, getting her pregnant and forcing her to get an abortion. But she is not at earth, she has and will have NO interactions with him at all. I'm probably being insensitive, but she annoys me other times as well. So that's all.

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ArailLv14

I am enjoying this novel but i agree with you, i thought she wanted to be sent back in time to have another chance with her mother and get revenge on the husband, so why would she need to keep the guy alive, she would be back in time when he was alive, so what is the point of helping him now? If is was just to use up points and put her in debt, the system shop prices could be higher and utilised more. Also i don't understand why she would rather start over on Earth when she has a restart option in the beast world, even after 100 chapter's in without the system she could be happy with any of the husbands and have a good life with the kids.

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