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Dr_Thanos
Dr_ThanosLv48mth
2024-08-27 12:44

The writing is good and stuff but I just don’t like the premise of the story. Why make him an uchiha if he doesn’t use sharingan and ninjutsu? Why give him some weird system that gives him titles? Why start the story somewhere in the middle? Idk but it has too many things that aren’t to my liking, others may find the unique way it’s set up interesting tho since it’s somewhat unconventional and new.

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Mohamed_Hassanen
Mohamed_HassanenLv4

I think it said that when the title evolved some chakra (yin) emerged from his eyes to solidify his experiences as a title ... From which I guess this title system is more of his Earle emergence of his mangekyou ability like with obito with the rock crushing him (I think)

Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

You didn't read far enough, some of your points are incorrect as they were shown later in the story. Stop here I'd you want to avoid spoilers. The reason he doesn't have the Sharingan is because he used the chakra meant to awaken them as a sacrifice help strengthen his body. It may seem stupid at first glance but he's punched a tailed-beast bomb and tore apart a susanoo with his bare hands. And damn I forgot what else there was I'll have to make another comment.

Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Ahh yes, as for ninjutsu he can use ninjutsu. It's just usually unnecessary for him since his taijutsu can typically handle whatever he faces.

Kamikaze_Eagle:You didn't read far enough, some of your points are incorrect as they were shown later in the story. Stop here I'd you want to avoid spoilers. The reason he doesn't have the Sharingan is because he used the chakra meant to awaken them as a sacrifice help strengthen his body. It may seem stupid at first glance but he's punched a tailed-beast bomb and tore apart a susanoo with his bare hands. And damn I forgot what else there was I'll have to make another comment.
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

Mc no tiene hermanos, obtener Sharingan por si solo no es tan bueno como el Mangekyou, y eso se terminan agotando fácilmente, entonces, enfocarse en el Taijutsu está bien, especialmente, porque mc no abandonó el ninjutsu de ninguna manera, solo abandonó el Sharingan.

Kamikaze_Eagle:You didn't read far enough, some of your points are incorrect as they were shown later in the story. Stop here I'd you want to avoid spoilers. The reason he doesn't have the Sharingan is because he used the chakra meant to awaken them as a sacrifice help strengthen his body. It may seem stupid at first glance but he's punched a tailed-beast bomb and tore apart a susanoo with his bare hands. And damn I forgot what else there was I'll have to make another comment.
Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Braian_Rodriguez:Mc no tiene hermanos, obtener Sharingan por si solo no es tan bueno como el Mangekyou, y eso se terminan agotando fácilmente, entonces, enfocarse en el Taijutsu está bien, especialmente, porque mc no abandonó el ninjutsu de ninguna manera, solo abandonó el Sharingan.
Bill_Smith_2424
Bill_Smith_2424Lv4

So why did he choose the uchiha? Because or uzumaki or senju would be better

Changalo_Hide
Changalo_HideLv14

It is still kind of stupid sure he is superhuman in body strength but what about the unique supernatural power front the sharingan?

Kamikaze_Eagle:You didn't read far enough, some of your points are incorrect as they were shown later in the story. Stop here I'd you want to avoid spoilers. The reason he doesn't have the Sharingan is because he used the chakra meant to awaken them as a sacrifice help strengthen his body. It may seem stupid at first glance but he's punched a tailed-beast bomb and tore apart a susanoo with his bare hands. And damn I forgot what else there was I'll have to make another comment.
Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv5

Stop here if you don't want spoilers. He gets sharingan later on.

Changalo_Hide:It is still kind of stupid sure he is superhuman in body strength but what about the unique supernatural power front the sharingan?
Vaen_4267
Vaen_4267Lv2

well, i havent read the ff yet but im a bigfan of naruto if this is what you are worried about it should be fine as long as the author is smart, if mc is strong then he can just take other peoples sharingan like danzo so shouldnt be a problem

Changalo_Hide:It is still kind of stupid sure he is superhuman in body strength but what about the unique supernatural power front the sharingan?
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