Very strange writing style. Regarding work: * The main character is given more time than the dungeons themselves at the beginning. Especially his exit into the forest is unnecessary, in my opinion, for the initial chapters. * The characters are not faded or memorable, with the exception of a few. There is very little description or reflection of their character. They are also hyper emotional. This is very strange, for example for knights. * Strong failures in Cause-Effect relationships. The motivation for many actions is very strange and does not look realistic. Which really takes you out of the immersion. In general, the work is very similar to the work of Chinese authors, I have already come across a couple of similar ones where the Main Character creates dungeons in the form of games. But it has some kind of dark style. Closer to chapter 50, it got much better when the knights started watching movies... alas, I won’t be able to support the author due to the restrictions of my country and find out what’s next. But as a fan of this type of short story: I wish the author success in his work!
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