Euiko

Very good work. I am very upset that there are so few chapters. I think there is a slight excess of the medical part, or rather this is normal, but the structure is a little unsuitable for the initial part of the work. The part with Orochimaru is simply wonderful - both the behavior of both characters and the image of Orochimaru himself. The author did a 12/10 job here. Overall, very good work, I wish the author success.

Perhaps I expressed myself unclearly because of the automatic translation. I mean a cheeky girl, what they call a "rocker". Who would behave wildly in public, but compensate for it with her songs and abilities. The Korean music industry is known for its intolerance of all sorts of wild things. And that would be very interesting.

Quite an interesting concept. Reincarnation in the body of a pop star who is in a terrible state of her career. A system that forces the character to follow the path of a "b*?ch" or more precisely "punk". This is very interesting, although the development of the plot for some reason looks as if the author decided to make the main character diligent who does "harmful" things only when necessary - this is very upsetting. I would like to see a real impudent who will go over heads. Alas, the novel seems to have been abandoned.

It's a pity that you decided to go the copy-paste route. At the beginning of the novel, we could have easily abandoned the system, made it mute, and let the hero figure out how to use it himself. In this way, you could have added realism, revealed the hero, and also easily played with the hero's feelings and negative emotions. It's a pity.. from the Apocalypse tag you expect some realism, something dark and serious.. and here, alas, there are pink ponies. In any case, good luck with your work.

You can check who the plagiarist is by the publication date... and anyway, what does it matter to me as a reader? That's what the administration is for. It would be better if you wrote a review of the novella, because the synopsis is very poor.

The PUBG arc is just a masterpiece (the beginning). Not a bad concept of the nightmares themselves and the two worlds, although unnecessary in my opinion. Alas, everything else is very, very bad.

Very strange writing style. Regarding work: * The main character is given more time than the dungeons themselves at the beginning. Especially his exit into the forest is unnecessary, in my opinion, for the initial chapters. * The characters are not faded or memorable, with the exception of a few. There is very little description or reflection of their character. They are also hyper emotional. This is very strange, for example for knights. * Strong failures in Cause-Effect relationships. The motivation for many actions is very strange and does not look realistic. Which really takes you out of the immersion. In general, the work is very similar to the work of Chinese authors, I have already come across a couple of similar ones where the Main Character creates dungeons in the form of games. But it has some kind of dark style. Closer to chapter 50, it got much better when the knights started watching movies... alas, I won’t be able to support the author due to the restrictions of my country and find out what’s next. But as a fan of this type of short story: I wish the author success in his work!