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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor8mth
2024-08-09 00:54

The second review, after going premium. There are 99 free chapters. Please try them. I am trying to do my own thing in my way by combining traditional novel style with web novels. I believe that every character has its own story and goals. So you will have POV changes. And in volume 1 the MC is more reactive than proactive because he is thrown into an ongoing mess.

The Stonehearted Knight

JayScribe
4.8
373 Chs

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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

If anyone wishes to ask me something, they can do here. Feel free to contact anytime.

8mth
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The_Soul_Wanderer
The_Soul_WandererLv2

Is this a harem?

JayScribe:If anyone wishes to ask me something, they can do here. Feel free to contact anytime.
5mth
JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

No. Some parts may look like its going the harem route but no it isn't.

The_Soul_Wanderer:Is this a harem?
5mth
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BottomlessShadow
BottomlessShadowLv14

But there will be romance right I prefer monogamy anyway

JayScribe:No. Some parts may look like its going the harem route but no it isn't.
5mth
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

It will be alluded to. But I have planned many weird things, so it will be there and not there. I can't fully explain. I am writing volume 2 now. By the end of it, readers will have a better idea what i mean with that.

BottomlessShadow:But there will be romance right I prefer monogamy anyway
5mth
Daxdrage
DaxdrageLv4

Is it gonna be a long lasting romance or just a fling

JayScribe:It will be alluded to. But I have planned many weird things, so it will be there and not there. I can't fully explain. I am writing volume 2 now. By the end of it, readers will have a better idea what i mean with that.
3mth
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

Is hard to reply. The romance is there but also not there? I mention it here and there but it is just a part of life. Not the main focus. And i dont know how to put spoiler tags but SPOILER: This is a world where powerhouses plan and act. The strongest ones. MC just trying to live in it. That's it. Simple as that.

Daxdrage:Is it gonna be a long lasting romance or just a fling
3mth
Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv15

What are the main character traits of the mc and will they change in the future?

2mth
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

It will change as the story progresses. Vague Spoilers: He starts of as a slumrat in an isolated town and has to deal with issues regarding Heaven and Earth as the story develops. He is mature beyond his age yet a curious boy at heart. He struggles with various emotions and has to come up with his own definition justice and what's right. The name is misleading yet not at the same time. I can assure you, it's not a edgy mc who believes in killing everyone. I hope this gives you an idea about the mc, the theme, and the world.

Alex_Guetta:What are the main character traits of the mc and will they change in the future?
2mth
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

Is the reply in your message or did I reply to myself. I am sorry if it isnt posted correctly

Alex_Guetta:What are the main character traits of the mc and will they change in the future?
2mth
Otaku_242
Otaku_242Lv13

so no romance? dull!

JayScribe:It will be alluded to. But I have planned many weird things, so it will be there and not there. I can't fully explain. I am writing volume 2 now. By the end of it, readers will have a better idea what i mean with that.
2mth
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

Yeah. I agree a little. But I have to keep it in the background or else the story would be the mc rushing to save a girl everywhere. Anyway, thank you for at least checking the comments.

Otaku_242:so no romance? dull!
2mth
Tanuki36
Tanuki36Lv4

may I ask the 'alignment' of the MC (like neutral, chaotic neutral,...)? I just want to know if he will be going around saving as many people as possible while screaming hysterically about justice. Or if he really does everything to survive.

JayScribe:Yeah. I agree a little. But I have to keep it in the background or else the story would be the mc rushing to save a girl everywhere. Anyway, thank you for at least checking the comments.
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

He is somewhere in the middle. He doesn't try to justify himself. He isn't also evil. He is just trying to survive and live as well as he can. He wont hold back even if it costs cities if he believes it required, and wont chase even villains if he thinks thats the right call for that moment. he regrets some of the things but wont get emotional episodes because of those. Like I said, he is trying to survive, acting as he sees fit. Does that help?

Tanuki36:may I ask the 'alignment' of the MC (like neutral, chaotic neutral,...)? I just want to know if he will be going around saving as many people as possible while screaming hysterically about justice. Or if he really does everything to survive.
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Tanuki36
Tanuki36Lv4

Yup thank you, I'll give this a try. it looks like a hidden gem

JayScribe:He is somewhere in the middle. He doesn't try to justify himself. He isn't also evil. He is just trying to survive and live as well as he can. He wont hold back even if it costs cities if he believes it required, and wont chase even villains if he thinks thats the right call for that moment. he regrets some of the things but wont get emotional episodes because of those. Like I said, he is trying to survive, acting as he sees fit. Does that help?
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JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

Well i hope so. Please do let me know. Even if you dont like it, leave a note so I can improve.

Tanuki36:Yup thank you, I'll give this a try. it looks like a hidden gem
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I, the shameless author, declare hereby my novel the best...that I could write. I thought it would be funny to write about an emotional person with a literal stone as heart. Why? Idk. The novel is a simple story about a teenage boy feeling the need to prove himself in a world where the humans, beasts and monsters take Heavens Blessing to advance to a higher level. I have planned limited mature scenes, almost no romace and certainly no system. Its a fantasy story in a fantasy world with fantasy elements. Simple and easy. I would appreciate everyones feedback. I am open to adept the storyline if there are acceptable suggestions. Thank you

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