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JayScribe
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2024-05-06 04:40

I, the shameless author, declare hereby my novel the best...that I could write. I thought it would be funny to write about an emotional person with a literal stone as heart. Why? Idk. The novel is a simple story about a teenage boy feeling the need to prove himself in a world where the humans, beasts and monsters take Heavens Blessing to advance to a higher level. I have planned limited mature scenes, almost no romace and certainly no system. Its a fantasy story in a fantasy world with fantasy elements. Simple and easy. I would appreciate everyones feedback. I am open to adept the storyline if there are acceptable suggestions. Thank you

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BottomlessShadow
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I’m just about to start reading but I believe if you’re going to make him advance high up in society he should have a wife for some reasons a lot of authors don’t do that till the very end although it doesn’t affect the quality of the novel I said this because you said you were taking suggestions

JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

I agree with you on that point and he will consider it but things will happen that keeps him from achieving that for a long time. I have 2 versions of the last chapter (end of the novel). In one he does, the other not. I am still undecided which one I end up using.

BottomlessShadow:I’m just about to start reading but I believe if you’re going to make him advance high up in society he should have a wife for some reasons a lot of authors don’t do that till the very end although it doesn’t affect the quality of the novel I said this because you said you were taking suggestions
Daxdrage
DaxdrageLv4

Please no romance

JayScribe
JayScribeAuthor

It's about life and living. An adoloscent without even a picture of someone in his heart? Even if he is stonehearted? i dont buy it. But Like i said. Its not the focus. There are 99 chapters free. See if it's to your liking?

Daxdrage:Please no romance
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