wonder and nice novel. The description is just the right way to nail down the real job. I look forward to more chapters ☺️

Wonderful writing, an absolute masterpiece waiting to be read. First chapter is so exciting that people just have to continue reading. There is nothing much I can say without spoiling the amazing plot, you all have to give it a try.

This is book is literally storytelling, the narrations feels like I'm reading a diary, it's on a first point of view. Though some paragraphs are really long, it's kinda exhausting to read without breaks and some missing punctuations only. Author should keep updating too^^

Alright, first the carrot. This is a rather interesting working work in the prospective of the author, in taking their experiences and turning into a unique adaptation of fantasy. (As there are only 2 chapter's I can't really comment to much on the fantasy aspect as we are still in the introductory faze of the novel) This Novel offers personality and help bring a new experience to it's readers. Now the Stick. This novel as quiet a few issues with grammar and punctuation and can be hard to read for some individuals. My Honest Opinion: I believe this story can be a interesting read if you can push past some of it's current issues. Genuinely the only issue i have the run on sentences. other than that it's rather easy to read that could easily be a very good book to read. keep up the work.

The book has several grammatical errors that confuse you a lot on who's exactly speaking or whether it's the author commentating. The myth concept is intriguing, but if you could fix these errors, the quality would heighten substantially.

Well, where should I begin? While I would like to sugar-coat the author's writing, the way they develop the story, and the information the reader swallows, I would like to give an accurate review of the story thus far. However, with the story being only two chapters long as of me writing this review, this should be taken with a grain of salt as the author will inevitably improve, and they have asked me to write this review very early. Let's start off with the writing quality. There may be grammatical errors, but these don't deter you from the plot, so they're not a big deal. The only problem I have is the lack of quotation marks or knowing who is talking to who, and if the character is actually talking or not. The story develops at a normal rate, with the first chapter being significantly shorter than the second, although in the first one it does seem like the author is writing the story in such a way that it feels like they're trying to push the reader on with the story, seeking to "get on with it" already. The character design is solid, but the main character suddenly becoming a gigachad within the first chapter out of nowhere makes it feel a little like they're rushed. I cannot write on the updating stability as of now with only two chapters, so I am average on it. The world background is fairly well described, with the reader knowing their surroundings. All in all, I believe the writer is using their raw talent to write. While talent is excellent to have, I believe talent alone cannot suffice without experience.

It is a fascinating novel. Expecting more chapter, author!

The writing style has a lot of personality, but it does seem a bit awkward and random at times. The writing is more casual and less formal, leading the reader to a deeper understanding of the main character. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the story is pretty good overall. There is only one chapter, but I'm sure the author will come out with more chapters soon.

thanks all will continue after sometime continue it