i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.
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thank man dodged a bullet here like come on a ninja and the son of the yelow flash losing in a speed battle
yeah..he didnt even need to nerf Naruto..DXD world has alot of characters that is/will be stronger than Naruto
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